Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This "last call" was so sweet. I love that you say "I love you" and that the rest doesn't matter. I also like that you didn't end with "goodbye," but "I'll see you later." Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you, Jessizero. I got you with your pet. ;) I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I love the way you have taken this prompt and turned it into a love letter. This is what any wife would want that last call to be. Well done. Thanks for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you, Ginda. :) I hope the phone call can wait.

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This a provocative prompt.

I have read a few, and I find it interesting the direction others have taken.

I agree with your sentiment in your author notes.

You have told a good and complete story using few words.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you, K.L. I try. I hope the phone call can wait, though.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A very interesting last call. I think the last call going to a spouse and expressing a deep and lasting love will resonate with FanStory readers.

A good idea for the contest. Good luck to you in the voting.

notes:

I will always be here if you need me.
Just call my name and I'll kiss you in your dreams.

- Consider where he is, and who is granting the call. How about:

God will always be there when you need Him.
Just call His name and He'll will here your heart..

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you, lancellot. :) I know you are right, but if I get to call maybe I get to comfort my wife.