Save Your Money
Watch it grow4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like that it is written in the color green for money. The message is clearly stated. It provides good advice. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like that it is written in the color green for money. The message is clearly stated. It provides good advice. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your helpful and kind review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture plus the 8 syllables made a great
little poem, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it.
The syllable count was correct per line with good
rhymes. You gave readers some great advice. I would
use the description box to say something about your poem--
maybe--Watch It Grow
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Your picture plus the 8 syllables made a great
little poem, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it.
The syllable count was correct per line with good
rhymes. You gave readers some great advice. I would
use the description box to say something about your poem--
maybe--Watch It Grow
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Celyn
This is a good idea for a poem and it follows the requirements of the 1-6-1 contest well. However, the 'your turn' bit sounds a little odd to me. Maybe I would have said 'in turn' instead as that sounds better to me. However, I do like this poem so good luck with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This is a good idea for a poem and it follows the requirements of the 1-6-1 contest well. However, the 'your turn' bit sounds a little odd to me. Maybe I would have said 'in turn' instead as that sounds better to me. However, I do like this poem so good luck with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I changed the word. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Save Your Money"
For thsy rainy day.
Save and start in July for Christmas day.
Save for a birthday or anniversary.
A wedding too.
But always not forget yo Save gor you!
Well written and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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"Save Your Money"
For thsy rainy day.
Save and start in July for Christmas day.
Save for a birthday or anniversary.
A wedding too.
But always not forget yo Save gor you!
Well written and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
