Misty Kisses
Lovers can be seen anywhere.12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, Misty Kisses, has the proper formatting and allows that desperate souls seek the secrecy of nature on an open road with away to go together.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This 1-6-1 poem, Misty Kisses, has the proper formatting and allows that desperate souls seek the secrecy of nature on an open road with away to go together.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Bill, for sharing my shortie. Rod
Comment from Spitfire
Congratulations on your win, Rod. Expert use of end rhyme. I had to return the favor of your reviewing my poem plus we have something in common. I taught English at the high school level for 36 years, loved eleventh and twelfth curriculum especially.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Congratulations on your win, Rod. Expert use of end rhyme. I had to return the favor of your reviewing my poem plus we have something in common. I taught English at the high school level for 36 years, loved eleventh and twelfth curriculum especially.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I really appreciate the reciprocal review, Spitfire, and your high praise of my rhymes. I enjoyed the sophomore level the most, but enjoyed juniors almost as much. I really hated teaching second semester seniors once they knew which college they?d be going to. Often they quit working. Rod
Comment from Mark D. R.
We are competing in the same contest. Stick to your longer ones so I have a better chance in these short ones LOL
Honestly, I verified that kissed was pronounced as 'kist.'
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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We are competing in the same contest. Stick to your longer ones so I have a better chance in these short ones LOL
Honestly, I verified that kissed was pronounced as 'kist.'
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Mark, thanks for being a good sport. I had no idea you were competing with me. Rod
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Rod,
It was a pleasure to share the podium steps with you. One reviewer commented about this being a 9-11 scenario.
So, in my next redo life, the 1-6-1 poem would be:
late
to 9-11 gate ?
fate
Mark
Comment from jaded831
Romantic, it touches me to my soul. Great entry, your words paint a beautiful picture. Your poem reminds me of a lost love, and the picture adds that special touch. Together they are awesome.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Romantic, it touches me to my soul. Great entry, your words paint a beautiful picture. Your poem reminds me of a lost love, and the picture adds that special touch. Together they are awesome.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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This poem was fun to write, and I am pleased you found it touching. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The rhyming is good; the story is clearly written with romance characteristics. It is great to write these syllable poems; they are short and also fun to write.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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The rhyming is good; the story is clearly written with romance characteristics. It is great to write these syllable poems; they are short and also fun to write.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Indeed this one was fun to write. I am very pleased you like it, Rosemary.
Rod
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It also provides a good rhyming pattern. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It also provides a good rhyming pattern. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for your high praise of my short poem.
Rod
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If it's good the length doesn't matter. You are welcome.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oooh! I haven't read all the entries yet, but this one definitely stands out for me. I like the words you chose because you didn't force the rhyme whatsoever. It's simple and perfect. Next, you found the PERFECT picture to go with it!! (Or did you start with the picture and then compose the poem?) Anyway, definitely a contender for my vote! Good luck in the polls. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Oooh! I haven't read all the entries yet, but this one definitely stands out for me. I like the words you chose because you didn't force the rhyme whatsoever. It's simple and perfect. Next, you found the PERFECT picture to go with it!! (Or did you start with the picture and then compose the poem?) Anyway, definitely a contender for my vote! Good luck in the polls. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Rachelle, the photo did inspire the poem. I truly appreciate all the kudos and I enjoy having that bright red ribbon. Rod
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You earned it big time, Baby!! Good work! xo
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I had a hunch about that pic-to-poem chronology!
Comment from Celyn
This is a good idea for a 1-6-1 poem but your second line has seven syllables in it rather than the required six. You could leave out 'thick' or 'grey' to make it fit though. Other than that the poem reads well so good luck with it
Celyn
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This is a good idea for a 1-6-1 poem but your second line has seven syllables in it rather than the required six. You could leave out 'thick' or 'grey' to make it fit though. Other than that the poem reads well so good luck with it
Celyn
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Wow! I can?t believe I missed that syllable count. Thanks, Celine, for catching my error. I took out "grey."
Comment from irishauthorme
Hey, a really neat-and clever!-use of words, while still conforming to the 1-6-1 rules!
Great picture to go with, kind of set the mood. The mist sort of hides the lovers from prying eyes.
Good work and good luck!'
irish
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Hey, a really neat-and clever!-use of words, while still conforming to the 1-6-1 rules!
Great picture to go with, kind of set the mood. The mist sort of hides the lovers from prying eyes.
Good work and good luck!'
irish
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Irish, for your kind praise.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love the artwork you submitted with your poetry. It is perfect and compliments the words you wrote. The poem is lovely and well-written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I love the artwork you submitted with your poetry. It is perfect and compliments the words you wrote. The poem is lovely and well-written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Wish I could take credit for the artwork, but I truly appreciate your praise of the poem.
