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15 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an amusing story not exactly from the Bible, but it's leaning that way. So, snake saved his friend, the worm, and Eve took the evil apple. Snake really ruined things for snakes with that mistake. Thanks for a good giggle before I head for bed.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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This is an amusing story not exactly from the Bible, but it's leaning that way. So, snake saved his friend, the worm, and Eve took the evil apple. Snake really ruined things for snakes with that mistake. Thanks for a good giggle before I head for bed.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Than?s, Carol, for the great review.
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a fun read I like when animals are given ahuman characteristics.. It should have been a contest entry. Very nice job. Merry Christmass and stay safe and healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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This was a fun read I like when animals are given ahuman characteristics.. It should have been a contest entry. Very nice job. Merry Christmass and stay safe and healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Spitfire
LOL A humorous take on the story of Adam and Eve. Gotta love that snake who did get rid of creepy creatures i.e. the frog and the mouse. That his mother disowned him is a line that really makes this post.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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LOL A humorous take on the story of Adam and Eve. Gotta love that snake who did get rid of creepy creatures i.e. the frog and the mouse. That his mother disowned him is a line that really makes this post.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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I?m sending Snake up the beanstalk next.
Comment from June Sargent
This is a very interesting take in what happened in the Garden of Eden! This would certainly appeal to young ones and those young at heart. Thanks for putting a smile on my face on a rainy day.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This is a very interesting take in what happened in the Garden of Eden! This would certainly appeal to young ones and those young at heart. Thanks for putting a smile on my face on a rainy day.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thanks, June, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is inventive and clever Bill and your stories are a joy to read. I wish I had a six left as I was entertained here, a magical story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Ha ha ha, this is inventive and clever Bill and your stories are a joy to read. I wish I had a six left as I was entertained here, a magical story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Dolly.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Sneaky snake. He deserved his fate!
I hate to be the one to break it to you... but mice can't talk. But if they could, I'm quite sure that it wouldn't be in English. And if they did, I seriously doubt that a mouse would admit to talking with a worm.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Sneaky snake. He deserved his fate!
I hate to be the one to break it to you... but mice can't talk. But if they could, I'm quite sure that it wouldn't be in English. And if they did, I seriously doubt that a mouse would admit to talking with a worm.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Someone should call Disney; they have an entire industry based on a talking mouse.
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Hah!
Good one!
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, what a hoot! If we accept the fact that there are 'fractured fairy tales,' then it would not be much of a leap to accept the 'fractured book of Genesis.' Very creative and exceptional. Terry.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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LOL, what a hoot! If we accept the fact that there are 'fractured fairy tales,' then it would not be much of a leap to accept the 'fractured book of Genesis.' Very creative and exceptional. Terry.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Terry.
Comment from damommy
If only it had happened this way. I like the direction you went with this. Offering a ride to the frog was a mean trick. However, even a snake deserves a mother who stands by him.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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If only it had happened this way. I like the direction you went with this. Offering a ride to the frog was a mean trick. However, even a snake deserves a mother who stands by him.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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He is a victim of *serpent-stances*
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🤣🤣🤣
Comment from nomi338
Yeah, ok. So, what you are telling me is Eve was just greedy, hungry and absent minded since she had been warned to not touch that particular tree. Then Adam, fool that he was, allowed himself to be taken in by the smell of a fresh baked pie, ate it, and they soon began to die.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Yeah, ok. So, what you are telling me is Eve was just greedy, hungry and absent minded since she had been warned to not touch that particular tree. Then Adam, fool that he was, allowed himself to be taken in by the smell of a fresh baked pie, ate it, and they soon began to die.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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I told a story about a snake with a pet worm.
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Yeah, but your story did not end there.
Comment from susand3022
You have to love a new take on an old story... there are always two sides! Nobody ever asked the serpent what he was doing in the Garden I suppose, did they?
I love when you do this... :)
Susan :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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You have to love a new take on an old story... there are always two sides! Nobody ever asked the serpent what he was doing in the Garden I suppose, did they?
I love when you do this... :)
Susan :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Susan, for the great review.
