Self reveal
Through our words11 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Writing poetry, or prose even, certainly is a very good method of revealing the writer's unique inner self and allows means to express themselves in ways not otherwise available. A little piece of the Writer shines through in all the create.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Writing poetry, or prose even, certainly is a very good method of revealing the writer's unique inner self and allows means to express themselves in ways not otherwise available. A little piece of the Writer shines through in all the create.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Brett. Yes, our writing expresses our uniqueness and our own story, almost like our fingerprint.
Comment from jaded831
Great entry. Your poem should appeal to everyone on this site. Our creations are truly a part of us, and when I don't write I get cranky. Writing is my therapy, I will do it till I physically can't anymore.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Great entry. Your poem should appeal to everyone on this site. Our creations are truly a part of us, and when I don't write I get cranky. Writing is my therapy, I will do it till I physically can't anymore.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review. Yes, our writing is like a fingerprint of who we are, and of our unique story.
Comment from Aiona
I love this cute short poem. It follows the required 1-6-1 syllable structure, and all three lines do rhyme. And it's such a truism. I can tell a person by the way they write.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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I love this cute short poem. It follows the required 1-6-1 syllable structure, and all three lines do rhyme. And it's such a truism. I can tell a person by the way they write.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you Aiona. Great review. Yes, you are right. We self-identify. I can frequently tell who wrote something for a blind contest, sometimes even just from the title.
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Wow, I just realised you gave me SIX stars. I am thankful and grateful.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like the idea of your poem. It is very true that we do write about ourselves and also take some ideas from our own life experiences. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Like the idea of your poem. It is very true that we do write about ourselves and also take some ideas from our own life experiences. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Rosemary. I like and appreciate your thoughtful review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It is relatable because I feel this way about my poetry too. It also provides a good rhyming pattern. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It is relatable because I feel this way about my poetry too. It also provides a good rhyming pattern. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Sandra - avery encouraging review.
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You are welcome. I voted for you and left a comment.
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Thank you so much! That is so very sweet of you, and I appreciate it.
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You are welcome. It's the one I liked the most.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is so eloquent and perfect in its simplicity. I couldn't love it more. You have said everything there is to say about writing poetry in a mere eight syllables, Mystery Writer. That is no simple task, so I am duly impressed. Good luck in the polls. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This is so eloquent and perfect in its simplicity. I couldn't love it more. You have said everything there is to say about writing poetry in a mere eight syllables, Mystery Writer. That is no simple task, so I am duly impressed. Good luck in the polls. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Rachelle. A most encouraging review!
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My pleasure!!
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A WELL-DESERVED, encouraging review!! xo
Comment from kiwisteveh
tough mission to make something meaningful in 8 syllables, with the added constriction of triplet rhyme. Of all the entries I have seen so far for this contest, yours stands out as the most meaningful - a poem about the art of writing, so most appropriate for a FanStory contest.
Good luck - this should do well.
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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tough mission to make something meaningful in 8 syllables, with the added constriction of triplet rhyme. Of all the entries I have seen so far for this contest, yours stands out as the most meaningful - a poem about the art of writing, so most appropriate for a FanStory contest.
Good luck - this should do well.
Steve
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Steve! Your review is very encouraging. Much appreciated.
Comment from pome lover
well, that's very good. Now, you have us wondering who you are! :)
We'd (I'd) like to see more of you.
At any rate, this is a very good 1-6-1, a good message.
If I may ask, how do you get that pretty font? I always try and end up with plain old blodk letters.
Katharine
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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well, that's very good. Now, you have us wondering who you are! :)
We'd (I'd) like to see more of you.
At any rate, this is a very good 1-6-1, a good message.
If I may ask, how do you get that pretty font? I always try and end up with plain old blodk letters.
Katharine
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you Katharine for the super review. Very positive.
The font is Caveat (size 48). I like it because it is just a little different, yet easy to read, not too fancy, not too plain, and not heavy.
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thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Self Reveal" is a 1-6-1 writing prompt entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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"Self Reveal" is a 1-6-1 writing prompt entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for reviewing and for your thoughts. Appreciated!
Comment from Karyn2
Excellent presentation and spot on message. I think no matter what we write even if fictitious or varied in style, the creator can't help but leave a mark on their creation and so leave apart of themselves for the world to see. I like what I see! Keep revealing more of yourself.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Excellent presentation and spot on message. I think no matter what we write even if fictitious or varied in style, the creator can't help but leave a mark on their creation and so leave apart of themselves for the world to see. I like what I see! Keep revealing more of yourself.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your great review. Very encouraging. I agree, there's always some part of ourselves left in our writing.
