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Ned Talks to Aesop 2

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Comment from Ulla
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Hahahaha, you just make me laugh, Bill. This is just brilliant. Those two can make the world go around all by themselves. I can't wait to see where you're taking this..Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
    Thanks, Ulla. Ned's dreams are always totally weird.
Comment from Earl Corp
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This was hilarious, I've missed reading Ned and Pons stories during my hiatus from Fanstory. Very nice job. Merry Christmas and stay healthy in the new year.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for the chuckles, Bill. Enjoyed the fun transformation of the characters and the linguistic explanation of the silent Z. It could happen! I wonder what Ned will dream up next.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    I see a giant in the forecast.
reply by lyenochka on 07-Dec-2022
    Sounds fun! Ned's dreams show he was paying lots of attention after all
Comment from nomi338
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Hey, did Ned say something deep? Now I am afraid, very much afraid, Ned is suddenly smart and I suddenly feel not so smart. My world has suddenly flipped upside down. Help!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Someone else must have written it.
Comment from BethShelby
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Ned must have taken a sleeping pill. He isn't waking up from this one. Too bad old Aesop got dragged into this one. His fable is getting reworked. Slow and steady may not win this time.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    For Ned, slow and steady is always the race.
Comment from royowen
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I like the way you manage to weave others into your fabulous script Bill, they are almost becoming immortal, so quirky they deserve to remain for the enjoyment of future readers, oh and of course Aesop,, beautifully written, blessings written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 07-Dec-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from susand3022
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It is Cousin It or has Crystal Gayle gone blonde? What a picture! I thought my hair was a pain in the butt when it got as long as it is now.
I love how these people all roll with the flow. Aesop is now Easup... and he doesn't even seem to mind! I wonder if the real Aesop would have? Most likely. We won't tell...
Susan :)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    It is the torte and the hair. Get it?