Life's Lasting Memories
Sonnet type- aabb52 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
At this poignant time of year, memories bubble to the surface. We are sad, missing our loved ones, loneliness sets in as age takes it's turn. Our bodies wilt just like the flowers of the field. Next morning they hold their heads high for another day. Happy memories stay with us just like a band aide covering our loss. Thinking of you and me as we head skyward. K xx
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At this poignant time of year, memories bubble to the surface. We are sad, missing our loved ones, loneliness sets in as age takes it's turn. Our bodies wilt just like the flowers of the field. Next morning they hold their heads high for another day. Happy memories stay with us just like a band aide covering our loss. Thinking of you and me as we head skyward. K xx
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing about the forever love you have for your wife. I'm so impressed that you still write these love poems for her. It's beautiful!
One question:
make str my thing, (str?)
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Thank you for sharing about the forever love you have for your wife. I'm so impressed that you still write these love poems for her. It's beautiful!
One question:
make str my thing, (str?)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this sad but romantic poem. It is so poignant. I am looking forward to the many excellent poems that you will write. Best wishes. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this sad but romantic poem. It is so poignant. I am looking forward to the many excellent poems that you will write. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This verse tells the story of love and the warmth you feel from the memories shared.
Your writing is pure.
Your carefully chosen words lace together the years shared with your love one.
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This verse tells the story of love and the warmth you feel from the memories shared.
Your writing is pure.
Your carefully chosen words lace together the years shared with your love one.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from Raul1
I think that we only need to relive our good memories. The bad ones we will erase. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice work!
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I think that we only need to relive our good memories. The bad ones we will erase. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice work!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another masterful sonnet about the love of your long life. You've been around, lived a long and fulfilling life and I like reading your poetic observations on life
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another masterful sonnet about the love of your long life. You've been around, lived a long and fulfilling life and I like reading your poetic observations on life
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
A very nice heartfelt poem about your wife. I hope I do not have to go through what you have endured. My wife has cancer, but so far things have been okay.
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A very nice heartfelt poem about your wife. I hope I do not have to go through what you have endured. My wife has cancer, but so far things have been okay.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Though sometimes we forget things until someone reminds us of them. There are some things we never will forget. We remember our loved ones and hope to see them again.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
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Though sometimes we forget things until someone reminds us of them. There are some things we never will forget. We remember our loved ones and hope to see them again.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A sweet and loving poem for and about your loving wife. As long as you keep her in your heart, she is with you.
You love for her is in every word.
Blessings
Mary
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A sweet and loving poem for and about your loving wife. As long as you keep her in your heart, she is with you.
You love for her is in every word.
Blessings
Mary
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
A powerful message to you dear departed wife. This speaks volumes about the love you felt and continue to feel for the love of your life, your lovely wife. I hope this review brings joy to your heart to keep you going and never stop.
Jesse
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A powerful message to you dear departed wife. This speaks volumes about the love you felt and continue to feel for the love of your life, your lovely wife. I hope this review brings joy to your heart to keep you going and never stop.
Jesse
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
