Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Jake, This is a beautiful tribute to those lost on December 7.
I think more should be done to remember the lost; while Oahu had a memorial service, I am not sure about the Mainland. It was barely mentioned or not at all in our newscast. Only one station mentioned the service on Oahu.
I hope when the last of the greatest generation fades, it is not completely forgotten.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022

thanks for the comments

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Good work, Jake. You have written a wonderful tribute to the fallen heroes of that terrible day. War takes so many young lives and leaves us wondering, why? Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022

thanks again

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Remembering Pearl Harbor " was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022

thanks, mate