The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Damn Reporters (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from Sankey
This was a great chapter. I almost missed it as I have been busy with other stuff. Seeing one of my favourite writers isn't adding to her story today, I had a spare SIX for you. Keep it going not sure if I missed anything.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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This was a great chapter. I almost missed it as I have been busy with other stuff. Seeing one of my favourite writers isn't adding to her story today, I had a spare SIX for you. Keep it going not sure if I missed anything.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for this stellar review and the excellent rating. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Good move on Miranda's part! The best defence is an offence! issy is going to realize Miranda is a force to be delt with. I hope that reporter goes after Missy now and leaves Miranda out of it. Well done, Gretchen. I was with her all the way just like a movie. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Good move on Miranda's part! The best defence is an offence! issy is going to realize Miranda is a force to be delt with. I hope that reporter goes after Missy now and leaves Miranda out of it. Well done, Gretchen. I was with her all the way just like a movie. Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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It's weird that so many people keep referring to this as like watching a movie. That's how it's coming to me. In scenes. Very vivid. Who knows. Thank you so much for this stellar rating and great review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hope Miranda's side to this situation gets told accurately. Even Waylon thinks Miranda and Mitch make an interesting couple. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I really like this story.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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I hope Miranda's side to this situation gets told accurately. Even Waylon thinks Miranda and Mitch make an interesting couple. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I really like this story.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, talking with a reporter is a no no, but sometimes it the lesser of two evils when someone is spreading bad information that can hurt you. LOL. So, just lie like hell. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Yes, talking with a reporter is a no no, but sometimes it the lesser of two evils when someone is spreading bad information that can hurt you. LOL. So, just lie like hell. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you. Miranda won't lie but she just might turn the tables on Missy. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice progress. Nicely written.
The lead claims that Miranda is not ready for a "pushy reporter", but the conversation doesn't really paint that picture. Maybe offer a little more threat of painting a worse picture of Miranda in her report?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Nice progress. Nicely written.
The lead claims that Miranda is not ready for a "pushy reporter", but the conversation doesn't really paint that picture. Maybe offer a little more threat of painting a worse picture of Miranda in her report?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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It's easier to hang up on a reporter than to tell her off in person. Miranda was kind of in between a rock and a hard place , so to speak . Thank you for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Oh, Geeze! I was wondering when she was coming back into the picture. The fact that you downplayed Mitch's infatuation with Miranda adds a new layer to this saga! Another great chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Oh, Geeze! I was wondering when she was coming back into the picture. The fact that you downplayed Mitch's infatuation with Miranda adds a new layer to this saga! Another great chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much. I think every woman gets that odd feeling when a guy plays it cool. Great review. I appreciate your insights. Greychen
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And now I realize I've been spelling your name wrong! :o. So, sorry!
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or did you spell your name wrong? :o LOL
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No. I spelled it wrong . It's Gretchen. Stupid fingers must have been moving too fast. Lol.
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Ha! LOL
Comment from royowen
So, the reporter rocks up, wanting to talk about Ed Preston, but Miranda makes a deal, the the reporter investigate the absence of Jason Toblerone. Ms weaver makes a not and an agreement with the reporter, well done, Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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So, the reporter rocks up, wanting to talk about Ed Preston, but Miranda makes a deal, the the reporter investigate the absence of Jason Toblerone. Ms weaver makes a not and an agreement with the reporter, well done, Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Miranda hoped this woman will take her suspicions seriously. Thank you for this awesome review. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from Wendy G
Reporters always manage to get what they want, by fair means or foul. I am sure Miranda will stand up to her, but at the same time she doesn't wan to get her off-side. I am really enjoying your story. Miranda is a really well-developed character, consistent and authentic. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Reporters always manage to get what they want, by fair means or foul. I am sure Miranda will stand up to her, but at the same time she doesn't wan to get her off-side. I am really enjoying your story. Miranda is a really well-developed character, consistent and authentic. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much. I appreciate the comments and the compliment about Miranda as a character. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
You have the perfect viewpoint character in Miranda (duh!) and writing this in the first person couldn't be better because the reader's view of everyone in the book is filtered through her lens. We only know Mitch through Miranda, which means you can dish Miranda (and the reader) some nifty surprises when the "real" Mitch reveals himself. Same with Missy. I thought for a brief minute (a few chapters ago) that Miranda's lens had distorted the image of the true Missy. Okay, I was proven wrong, as was Miranda, when she discovered Missy's hanky-panky in the bathroom. But that doesn't make her a murderer.
You've done another marvelous job with this chaper, Gretchen. I'll be looking forward to her interview with the reporter.
Jay
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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You have the perfect viewpoint character in Miranda (duh!) and writing this in the first person couldn't be better because the reader's view of everyone in the book is filtered through her lens. We only know Mitch through Miranda, which means you can dish Miranda (and the reader) some nifty surprises when the "real" Mitch reveals himself. Same with Missy. I thought for a brief minute (a few chapters ago) that Miranda's lens had distorted the image of the true Missy. Okay, I was proven wrong, as was Miranda, when she discovered Missy's hanky-panky in the bathroom. But that doesn't make her a murderer.
You've done another marvelous job with this chaper, Gretchen. I'll be looking forward to her interview with the reporter.
Jay
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much. I truly appreciate the nice review and comments. Gretchen
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Yep.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, flirting is flirting, even kids know it when the see it, or feel it or whatever. This was like a short interlude. It was well written and ended with a positive sense of relief for your MC.
Good work.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Yes, flirting is flirting, even kids know it when the see it, or feel it or whatever. This was like a short interlude. It was well written and ended with a positive sense of relief for your MC.
Good work.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much. I appreciate that you caught the nuances of my character. Gretchen
