Brrr...
a 3-5-7 poem14 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Blanks
If you Brrrave the wind whistling through the Brrranches, you can Brrrush the snow off your Brrronco and drive to Brrrooks Brrrothers! Thank you for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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If you Brrrave the wind whistling through the Brrranches, you can Brrrush the snow off your Brrronco and drive to Brrrooks Brrrothers! Thank you for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Lol. That was very clever of you. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Celyn
This poem is a great description of a cold winter's day. It follows the rules of the 3-5-7 contest and reads well. I particularly like the shivering trees, although I'm sure that they don't.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This poem is a great description of a cold winter's day. It follows the rules of the 3-5-7 contest and reads well. I particularly like the shivering trees, although I'm sure that they don't.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I'm sure the trees don't like it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from lyenochka
Great description of the cold day using alliteration and personification. The word order of the last line made me wonder who was doing the "shuddering." If it were the trees, then the plural would require "shudder."
If it were the wind, then it would be singular.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Great description of the cold day using alliteration and personification. The word order of the last line made me wonder who was doing the "shuddering." If it were the trees, then the plural would require "shudder."
If it were the wind, then it would be singular.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. The wind was doing the shuddering, and therefore, the singular. I appreciate you checking.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-7 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and vivid verb choices.
-You create a vivid word picture of the wintry scene
with wind, snow, and "shivering bare trees."
-A very good entry; I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and vivid verb choices.
-You create a vivid word picture of the wintry scene
with wind, snow, and "shivering bare trees."
-A very good entry; I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Pam, for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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You are very welcome, Faith.
Comment from zanya
This short succinct 3-5-7 format and the appropriate title captures the mood exactly of the chilly feel of winter around us- alliteration used to great effect
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This short succinct 3-5-7 format and the appropriate title captures the mood exactly of the chilly feel of winter around us- alliteration used to great effect
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great adjectives to describe the picture you have chosen. Your words make the reader feel like they are there, feeling the wind. This is a good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Great adjectives to describe the picture you have chosen. Your words make the reader feel like they are there, feeling the wind. This is a good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice alliteration. Your image is a good choice of accompaniment, and the presentation suits both the image and the words. Best wishes for an excellent entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Very nice alliteration. Your image is a good choice of accompaniment, and the presentation suits both the image and the words. Best wishes for an excellent entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Lovely image which complements the text! The combination of alliteration and onomatopoeia is very effective in conveying the power of the wind!
This meets the demands of the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Lovely image which complements the text! The combination of alliteration and onomatopoeia is very effective in conveying the power of the wind!
This meets the demands of the competition.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A chilling write and we are expecting snow any day now as the temperatures have plummeted, your words remind me how magical it will be, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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A chilling write and we are expecting snow any day now as the temperatures have plummeted, your words remind me how magical it will be, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. We are also watching the weather forecast here though we are on the border of rain/snow. We shall see. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
