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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 poem contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The AN section also had good information. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
    Glad you read the notes and enjoyed my wee poem.

    I tried to offer something different from the usual love and seasonal themed ones.

    Keep safe!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 14-Dec-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How fascinating it must have been to discover fire and the shock of it too. There must have been much fear of this powerful sorcery, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Mankind has come along way since then if we trust science.

    And so I ponder : where does Adam and Eve fit in for a believer?
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Thank you for sharing this information with us. I can't imagine what their life must have been like before the fire. Your poem is well executed and the artwork is perfect. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Mankind has come along way since then if we place our trust in science.

    And for a believer , where does Adam and Eve fit in ?

    Thanks for reviewing my entry !