Knocking At The Backdoor
2nd Place8 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
This is quite a powerful message. Hilarious! I enjoyed reading this piece. The writing prompt is more than met. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing your gift.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This is quite a powerful message. Hilarious! I enjoyed reading this piece. The writing prompt is more than met. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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As a 21st Century Humorist, I thought there should be no subject I can?t write about. I?m glad you laughed!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Okay! and the first one I click on is this one! Hahahaha! I haven't looked at your other work, so if this is your best, I'm looking forward to the rest! Loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Okay! and the first one I click on is this one! Hahahaha! I haven't looked at your other work, so if this is your best, I'm looking forward to the rest! Loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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This was the 21st Century Humorist side of me coming out. Not much I won?t write about, but was very surprised this placed second.
Comment from Rena Smith
This was a good poem and it was well thought out and written. It followed the prompt guideline. I like it because it is genuine and has a little comical side to it but yet serious. Hats off to you, great job.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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This was a good poem and it was well thought out and written. It followed the prompt guideline. I like it because it is genuine and has a little comical side to it but yet serious. Hats off to you, great job.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you Rena! I appreciate you seeing the humor!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHA! I love entries that are plucky and just plain fun...and MEMORABLE! Check, check and check! May you boogie down to the winner's circle where relief awaits!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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HAHAHAHA! I love entries that are plucky and just plain fun...and MEMORABLE! Check, check and check! May you boogie down to the winner's circle where relief awaits!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Ha! I laughed so hard my eyes watered when this was actually winning! Can you imagine this in the victory circle. Ha!!! Someone has to lighten the mood around here. Burning kangaroos is beating me. Oh my?..
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It's FS, Baby, where ANYTHING goes!
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Amen to that!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and your humour carries this write straight to my senses with laughter! I loved your unusual approach to this contest and I shall vote for you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This made me smile and your humour carries this write straight to my senses with laughter! I loved your unusual approach to this contest and I shall vote for you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you Dolly. I was surprised it did poorly, but I accomplished my task and made people laugh!
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The voting has only just started so you still might win x
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Sorry. I thought this one ended. Been very hectic here with holidays, plus we just got a puppy, and three of my kids have Covid. Thanks for the heads up!
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Sorry your kids have Covid, take care x x x
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Lol So funny. I love it. I always need a good laugh!!!! Thank you for sharing. Well written. You really followed the prompt.
Well illustrated, I must say! Good Luck.
Write On and Share On
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Lol So funny. I love it. I always need a good laugh!!!! Thank you for sharing. Well written. You really followed the prompt.
Well illustrated, I must say! Good Luck.
Write On and Share On
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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You are awesome sauce!
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Lol
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I?m having a belly laugh that this thing was even winning for a moment!!! Can you imagine this piece as a FS winner!! Too funny. Have a great day.
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Yes I can! Believe in yourself
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very amusing. It certainly gets its point across. Looks like you were out to sea, or someone was with a sense of humor and a good photographer. Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Very amusing. It certainly gets its point across. Looks like you were out to sea, or someone was with a sense of humor and a good photographer. Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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It shall go down in the annals of FS history!
Comment from Karyn2
Ha, ha, ha!! The picture alone is simply delightful! Glad I wasn't drinking or eating or I would have snorted, choked or covered myself (lovely image!) In foodstuff while choking back laughter. So no bushfire or burning passion for you then ey? Simply a little fire out the back. Well done, fun times. Thanks for the laugh today!!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Ha, ha, ha!! The picture alone is simply delightful! Glad I wasn't drinking or eating or I would have snorted, choked or covered myself (lovely image!) In foodstuff while choking back laughter. So no bushfire or burning passion for you then ey? Simply a little fire out the back. Well done, fun times. Thanks for the laugh today!!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Ahhhh . . . it shall go down in the annals of FS history!
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You keep cracking me up ?anals?!! Well yes it will go down there.
