Distress at injustice
Inner turmoil and16 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Wendy:
The comparison and contrast in your poem (around a joyous holiday) is excellent. So many people and animals don't have voices; many are often victims of injustice. I'm glad you speak out for them and call attention to the plight of many.
Good luck with this wonderful poem, Wendy.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Wendy:
The comparison and contrast in your poem (around a joyous holiday) is excellent. So many people and animals don't have voices; many are often victims of injustice. I'm glad you speak out for them and call attention to the plight of many.
Good luck with this wonderful poem, Wendy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Cindy for your super review and your good wishes. Your words are very encouraging. Thank you too for the gift of a pump. So very kind.
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is very true and very good. The strong must always stand up for the weak.
The system is Run by PEOPLE. Justice will only come from just people.
This was a thinking piece. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This is very true and very good. The strong must always stand up for the weak.
The system is Run by PEOPLE. Justice will only come from just people.
This was a thinking piece. Nicely done!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review. I appreciate it a lot.
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Very good work!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Bullying is certainly a dreadful thing which blights many lives- especially the lives of children! The social media is partly to blame. This is a strongly written, emotive poem!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Bullying is certainly a dreadful thing which blights many lives- especially the lives of children! The social media is partly to blame. This is a strongly written, emotive poem!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sarah. I appreciate your positive and encouraging review.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love the way you have examined your feelings of injustice through poetry, each line a reminder of injustices that often go unnoticed in our busy world. You tell us to pay attention, to care, and to speak up. Well done. Good luck and Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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I love the way you have examined your feelings of injustice through poetry, each line a reminder of injustices that often go unnoticed in our busy world. You tell us to pay attention, to care, and to speak up. Well done. Good luck and Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Ginda. I appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from Karyn2
Yes! Use your voice for good. Stand up against the wrong and the injustices. This is a passion of mine also. I can clearly see your passion burning in this poem for humanity and nature. I love the rhyme and sentiments and the emotive words you use. Some longer lines with more syllables change the rhythmic feels so there are places where it doesn't flow as smoothly. A strong message!
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Yes! Use your voice for good. Stand up against the wrong and the injustices. This is a passion of mine also. I can clearly see your passion burning in this poem for humanity and nature. I love the rhyme and sentiments and the emotive words you use. Some longer lines with more syllables change the rhythmic feels so there are places where it doesn't flow as smoothly. A strong message!
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you for a lovely review. You are quite right about the metre (it's not my strength, and I tend to sacrifice metre to what I want to say!) but I'll take another look. Thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with you hear, there are so many injustices in the world and jealous people who cause harm to others. It is distressing, especially when it involves children and animals who at the mercy of adults, a poignant and melancholy write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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I so agree with you hear, there are so many injustices in the world and jealous people who cause harm to others. It is distressing, especially when it involves children and animals who at the mercy of adults, a poignant and melancholy write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful words.
