Yesterday
This is a re-write of the Beatles song.7 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is really beautifully written and so true. It could be sung to the melody the Beatles had. There is nothing to compare to the forgiveness of the Lord.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is really beautifully written and so true. It could be sung to the melody the Beatles had. There is nothing to compare to the forgiveness of the Lord.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful rating. My computer has been unavailable so I wasn't able to respond until now. Thank you.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your words are so creative and stunningly beautiful. Your re-write is a heartfelt prayer that we all need to pray. Your rhythm is so accurate that I could sing along. I enjoyed your version. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Your words are so creative and stunningly beautiful. Your re-write is a heartfelt prayer that we all need to pray. Your rhythm is so accurate that I could sing along. I enjoyed your version. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful rating. My computer has been unavailable so I wasn't able to respond until now. Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a well done take on that familiar song. The Lord has done so much for us. I really like the lines:
"Why You loved me so
I don't know, You didn't say
I've done so much wrong
But you forgave me yesterday"
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is a well done take on that familiar song. The Lord has done so much for us. I really like the lines:
"Why You loved me so
I don't know, You didn't say
I've done so much wrong
But you forgave me yesterday"
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful rating. My computer has been unavailable so I wasn't able to respond until now. Thank you.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
This was beautiful, so well written. The lyrics perfectly fit the song.. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. it makes a great praise and worship song.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This was beautiful, so well written. The lyrics perfectly fit the song.. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. it makes a great praise and worship song.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful rating. My computer has been unavailable so I wasn't able to respond until now. Thank you.
Comment from karenina
Who doesn't love this song? Your reverent lyrics bring deeper meaning and the clear pure voice of the faithful in every line. Written in the true spirit of the Christmas Season! I was sitting here singing your words above Paul's rendition. (Thank goodness you were not subjected to that noise!
Thanks for the trip down memory lane. I do believe. Yesterday, today, and tomorrow!
Best of luck in the contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Who doesn't love this song? Your reverent lyrics bring deeper meaning and the clear pure voice of the faithful in every line. Written in the true spirit of the Christmas Season! I was sitting here singing your words above Paul's rendition. (Thank goodness you were not subjected to that noise!
Thanks for the trip down memory lane. I do believe. Yesterday, today, and tomorrow!
Best of luck in the contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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I would have loved to hear the "noise". Thank you.
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You're most welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You did a good job with your version of "Yesterday."
-A great song choice to work with, too.
-I like how you chose to address the Lord in your version.
-You have a good chorus, and I like these lines:
"I've done so much wrong
But you forgave me yesterday."
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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-You did a good job with your version of "Yesterday."
-A great song choice to work with, too.
-I like how you chose to address the Lord in your version.
-You have a good chorus, and I like these lines:
"I've done so much wrong
But you forgave me yesterday."
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a great re-write of the popular song "Yesterday." You did a great job changing the words, making them spiritual, but keeping them as a love song at the same time. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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What a great re-write of the popular song "Yesterday." You did a great job changing the words, making them spiritual, but keeping them as a love song at the same time. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
