Take Me Home, Potholed Roads
My version of Country Roads37 total reviews
Comment from thoughtgame2
I'm glad I read this poem of yours about pot holes...im from Michigan and this is the first time I ever thought to mention we are not the pot hole capitol of the world. Other people got it bad also. Besides that truth ...it was a very good read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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I'm glad I read this poem of yours about pot holes...im from Michigan and this is the first time I ever thought to mention we are not the pot hole capitol of the world. Other people got it bad also. Besides that truth ...it was a very good read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Earl,
Being a Pennsylvania gal, I appreciated your words in the poem. We have potholes in town that get fixed, and in six months, they're deep again, ruining cars, etc.
Congratulations on your well-deserved ranking, Earl.
I hope you have a great new year full of good health and happiness.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Earl,
Being a Pennsylvania gal, I appreciated your words in the poem. We have potholes in town that get fixed, and in six months, they're deep again, ruining cars, etc.
Congratulations on your well-deserved ranking, Earl.
I hope you have a great new year full of good health and happiness.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much Cindy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem. Where in PA? Sorry it took so long to respond.
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Hi, Earl.
I live in Northwest PA, Earl. Lots of deer and rednecks. Lol. It?s cold and dreary here most of the winter.
Have a really nice week.
Cindy
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I live in Crawford County
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I live in Elk County. It?s a beautiful area, but not much to do. I like the quiet.
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Ridgeway?
Comment from evilynne
That's a great takeoff on the original song, well written and humorous. I think that John Denver would have liked it. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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That's a great takeoff on the original song, well written and humorous. I think that John Denver would have liked it. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Evi. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Earl
Your song definitely fits John Denver, but Darius Rucker's Wagon Wheel came to mind as well. Well done and I wish you the best in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good morning, Earl
Your song definitely fits John Denver, but Darius Rucker's Wagon Wheel came to mind as well. Well done and I wish you the best in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Carol. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Pantygynt
This takes me back to the start of my writing career because writing parody or pastiche if you prefer it is how I started. This fits the John Denver version generally very well though I got a bit lost around the 'Disillusioned mama' bit. Never mind though you have given a great song a new home with those potholled roads.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This takes me back to the start of my writing career because writing parody or pastiche if you prefer it is how I started. This fits the John Denver version generally very well though I got a bit lost around the 'Disillusioned mama' bit. Never mind though you have given a great song a new home with those potholled roads.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Karyn2
This takes me back to my childhood! My dad loved John Denver! I great attempt. I like the potholed road take on the country road. I think I would have liked more rhymes at stanza ends as the original does well. A few little typos Pennsylvania is spelt 3 different ways and last disillusioned misspelled. Best wishes for contest!
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This takes me back to my childhood! My dad loved John Denver! I great attempt. I like the potholed road take on the country road. I think I would have liked more rhymes at stanza ends as the original does well. A few little typos Pennsylvania is spelt 3 different ways and last disillusioned misspelled. Best wishes for contest!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ahhh good stuff! Sounds like Michigan. Potholes are the worst!
I enjoyed this write-up and the creative way that you matched the song. Very talented.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Ahhh good stuff! Sounds like Michigan. Potholes are the worst!
I enjoyed this write-up and the creative way that you matched the song. Very talented.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
Boy, oh boy, this is the second posting with a popular song as its inspiration. I love the song you had in your mind and you did a fabulous job with this creation.
Potholed roads is hilarious and I must give a special shout out to 'Disillusioned mama.' What a hoot!
Of course the theme of this work is sad, but you presented this message in such an entertaining way. Hugs, Lilly
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Boy, oh boy, this is the second posting with a popular song as its inspiration. I love the song you had in your mind and you did a fabulous job with this creation.
Potholed roads is hilarious and I must give a special shout out to 'Disillusioned mama.' What a hoot!
Of course the theme of this work is sad, but you presented this message in such an entertaining way. Hugs, Lilly
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Lilly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from JPGeo
Good job Earl. This contest was too hard for me but I'm enjoying reviewing the talented poets that decided to take it on. I tried to karaoke this using your words and while I'm no John Denver, I think I did it justice. Wishing all the best,
John
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good job Earl. This contest was too hard for me but I'm enjoying reviewing the talented poets that decided to take it on. I tried to karaoke this using your words and while I'm no John Denver, I think I did it justice. Wishing all the best,
John
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much John. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Rickie1
Earl
Living in New York not far From Pennsylvania I know and have driven through many deep potholes and scared to shit I broke something in my truck. See humor, truth and anguish in your rendition poem. Well done. Thanks Rickie
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Earl
Living in New York not far From Pennsylvania I know and have driven through many deep potholes and scared to shit I broke something in my truck. See humor, truth and anguish in your rendition poem. Well done. Thanks Rickie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Rickie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
