Take Me Home, Potholed Roads
My version of Country Roads37 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me laugh, I loved that song and you made me think of all those potholes in the roads on those country roads, a fun and humorous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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This made me laugh, I loved that song and you made me think of all those potholes in the roads on those country roads, a fun and humorous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I have experienced the potholes in Pennsylvania so I understand where you are coming from. I enjoyed your lyrics, quite humorous and fun. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I have experienced the potholes in Pennsylvania so I understand where you are coming from. I enjoyed your lyrics, quite humorous and fun. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
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Comment from royowen
Believe it or not I sing this with the troubadour group I sing with, it suits my ballad style voice. But you've done a sterling job with rewriting the lyrics to this iconic, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Believe it or not I sing this with the troubadour group I sing with, it suits my ballad style voice. But you've done a sterling job with rewriting the lyrics to this iconic, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
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Most welcome Earl
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever. Your song is realistic and humorous, and made relevant to your situation and location. I enjoyed your entry. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Very clever. Your song is realistic and humorous, and made relevant to your situation and location. I enjoyed your entry. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Wendy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
John Denver was one of the best. He passed away too early in life. Your words that you rewrote are very good. Potholes are what we also have in the spring so we can relate to your written song.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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John Denver was one of the best. He passed away too early in life. Your words that you rewrote are very good. Potholes are what we also have in the spring so we can relate to your written song.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Interesting variation on a great country song, actually my favourite from Denver. You did well keeping the 'take me home, potholed road' just like in the original song, it is much more 'singable' that way. Good luck on the contest
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Interesting variation on a great country song, actually my favourite from Denver. You did well keeping the 'take me home, potholed road' just like in the original song, it is much more 'singable' that way. Good luck on the contest
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
What a cleverly written Re-write a song entry. The text is a great size, and I found myself singing with your text to see if it fit. It for sure did. The visual fits perfectly. I will be surprised if you are not in the top three. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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What a cleverly written Re-write a song entry. The text is a great size, and I found myself singing with your text to see if it fit. It for sure did. The visual fits perfectly. I will be surprised if you are not in the top three. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. You took John Denver's nostalgic song and made it a truly a country western song with disillusionment and unemployment as part of the story. I think I could sing the melody most of the time. "Disillusioned mama" could be shortened to fit the "West Virginia." Overall great job and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Lol. You took John Denver's nostalgic song and made it a truly a country western song with disillusionment and unemployment as part of the story. I think I could sing the melody most of the time. "Disillusioned mama" could be shortened to fit the "West Virginia." Overall great job and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-I live in NJ, and hear about those potholed roads!
-You did a good job with your rendition of the song.
-The chorus was very good, and I could hear
the music as I read.
-Effective images like "disillusioned mama"
and the line about the "mill worker's lady."
-A good entry; good luck!!!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-I live in NJ, and hear about those potholed roads!
-You did a good job with your rendition of the song.
-The chorus was very good, and I could hear
the music as I read.
-Effective images like "disillusioned mama"
and the line about the "mill worker's lady."
-A good entry; good luck!!!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Pam. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
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You are very welcome, Earl. Are you from the Philly area?!
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No the western side between Pittsburgh and Erie.
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I didn't know that's where you were from. We're about 40 min. from Philadelphia.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this satirical take on the classic Take me home country roads. Not having been much in Pennsylvania I can only imagine the conditions of the roads there but I liked this take.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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love this satirical take on the classic Take me home country roads. Not having been much in Pennsylvania I can only imagine the conditions of the roads there but I liked this take.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my song.
