Treat, Please!
Dogs are not dumb.19 total reviews
Comment from Karyn2
Of course Mummy always has treats for the fur kids and human kids!! This doggy knows there are always treats! A sweet little story well written for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Of course Mummy always has treats for the fur kids and human kids!! This doggy knows there are always treats! A sweet little story well written for the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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I really appreciate your complimentary review, Karyn. Many thanks for sharing my story.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Dogs are very smart. They not only know how to smile, they know how to give you sad puppy dog eyes so you'll give them what they want. Your story is well written, and interesting. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Dogs are very smart. They not only know how to smile, they know how to give you sad puppy dog eyes so you'll give them what they want. Your story is well written, and interesting. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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You are absolutely correct. Dogs are sharp and know how to play you. Many thanks for sharing my story and the best wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and story to go with it.
-A good opening that catches our attention.
-Effective description about how Heidi had hurt her paw.
-I like how the boy indicates treats aren't always available;
a business man in the making.
-Heidi definitely knows who to make eyes at.
-A very good ending, too. Seems mom knows best,
at least according to Heidi!!!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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-Very nice artwork and story to go with it.
-A good opening that catches our attention.
-Effective description about how Heidi had hurt her paw.
-I like how the boy indicates treats aren't always available;
a business man in the making.
-Heidi definitely knows who to make eyes at.
-A very good ending, too. Seems mom knows best,
at least according to Heidi!!!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Pam, many thanks for your marvelous review. I really appreciate your compliments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from jessizero
LOL! I don't think that the dog is going to learn her lesson this way. I really enjoyed reading this piece of flash fiction. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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LOL! I don't think that the dog is going to learn her lesson this way. I really enjoyed reading this piece of flash fiction. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I am delighted you enjoyed my story, jessi. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This reminds me of my cat, Luna, every time I take to her, or go into the kitchen, or eat something, she thinks it's treat time for her. It's only the two of us, so I've spoiled her. I've started giving her just three treats at a time. Honestly, sometimes I think she can count!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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This reminds me of my cat, Luna, every time I take to her, or go into the kitchen, or eat something, she thinks it's treat time for her. It's only the two of us, so I've spoiled her. I've started giving her just three treats at a time. Honestly, sometimes I think she can count!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Cats are quite sharp and far less subtle. Many thanks for sharing my story.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
I had a dog that got into a tackle box and ate a six-inch rubber worm that was rigged with two hooks and a spinner. That was an expensive treat. LOL :-)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I had a dog that got into a tackle box and ate a six-inch rubber worm that was rigged with two hooks and a spinner. That was an expensive treat. LOL :-)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Ow! I hope your dog did not suffer. Many thanks for sharing my story.
Comment from lancellot
Well, it seems moms are suckers for sad looks, from dogs, children and sometimes (I hear) husbands. But, not mother-in-laws.
This is well written and you provided a full seventy word story with a flash ending.
Well done and good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Well, it seems moms are suckers for sad looks, from dogs, children and sometimes (I hear) husbands. But, not mother-in-laws.
This is well written and you provided a full seventy word story with a flash ending.
Well done and good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, lancellot, for your high praise of my story
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, dogs are or can be manipulative, but cats on the other hand, have Lord of the manner approach to their kingdoms. I like this response to this prompt, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Oh yes, dogs are or can be manipulative, but cats on the other hand, have Lord of the manner approach to their kingdoms. I like this response to this prompt, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I am delighted you enjoyed my story, Roy. Many thanks for sharing.
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Well done
Comment from Pearl Edwards
No, dogs are not dumb and they soon get to know where extra treats will come from. Though, even though it was self done, a fish hook in the paw did deserve a treat. LOL Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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No, dogs are not dumb and they soon get to know where extra treats will come from. Though, even though it was self done, a fish hook in the paw did deserve a treat. LOL Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I must confess my sympathies are with Heidi, too. Many thanks, Pearl,for sharing my story.
