Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Christmas Spirit "Do good and feel good poems
41 total reviews
Comment from JLR
This is a strong message, at a timely period on all our calendars. Thank you for this tiemly message in your well presented Nonet, good success in this and all our writing efforts.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This is a strong message, at a timely period on all our calendars. Thank you for this tiemly message in your well presented Nonet, good success in this and all our writing efforts.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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JLR, thank you very much for your awesome review, and for your lovely comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, The Christmas Spirit, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that Christ was born and eventually died to save mankind and provide eternal life. Nice.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This nonet, The Christmas Spirit, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that Christ was born and eventually died to save mankind and provide eternal life. Nice.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Bill, thank you very much for your awesome review, and for your lovely comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an amazing nonet! The monorhyme is spot on and flows perfectly. That is not easy to do. The message you are sending about love and kindness between us all, is as it should be, not only at Christmas, but throughout the year. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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What an amazing nonet! The monorhyme is spot on and flows perfectly. That is not easy to do. The message you are sending about love and kindness between us all, is as it should be, not only at Christmas, but throughout the year. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Sandra, thank you very much for your awesome review, and for your lovely comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from LJbutterfly
You did a beautiful job with your Nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is perfect and your end rhymes are creative. Your words deliver a powerful message for Christmas, and always. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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You did a beautiful job with your Nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is perfect and your end rhymes are creative. Your words deliver a powerful message for Christmas, and always. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Lorraine ! You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks again my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment from Karyn2
A lovely Christmas message for your nonet and you are right it's not just on one day but throughout the year. Lovely to finish on the word praise too.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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A lovely Christmas message for your nonet and you are right it's not just on one day but throughout the year. Lovely to finish on the word praise too.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Karyn ! You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks again my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment from Wendy G
A good summary of the need to express faith in actions and lifestyle as well as words. Clever to include rhyme throughout. Best wishes for your entry. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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A good summary of the need to express faith in actions and lifestyle as well as words. Clever to include rhyme throughout. Best wishes for your entry. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Wendy! You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks again my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful spiritual entry for the Nonet Poem Contest.
Good nonet form.
Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Wonderful spiritual entry for the Nonet Poem Contest.
Good nonet form.
Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks Gypsy, I do appreciate your kind comments for my poem. Thank you so much my sweet friend. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Comment from poetwatch
Praise the Lord "not just holidays" but every day of life for He gave his life so that we may live, author. The smile on a child He would love to see, for the innocent are welcome in His kingdom. This is a good entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Praise the Lord "not just holidays" but every day of life for He gave his life so that we may live, author. The smile on a child He would love to see, for the innocent are welcome in His kingdom. This is a good entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much. You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks again my dear friend! Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very short but much needed piece. Sometimes we don't need a sermon. We need a reminder. Gentle and loving, like your poem. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed this very much. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This was a very short but much needed piece. Sometimes we don't need a sermon. We need a reminder. Gentle and loving, like your poem. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed this very much. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Gretchen. You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks my dear friend!
Comment from Ulla
This is a beautiful nonet poem with a lovely presentation. Yes, indeed the Christmas season is upon us in our part of the world. My thoughts go to all of those who won't have anything to celebrate. Ukraine springs to mind. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This is a beautiful nonet poem with a lovely presentation. Yes, indeed the Christmas season is upon us in our part of the world. My thoughts go to all of those who won't have anything to celebrate. Ukraine springs to mind. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Ulla. Y'know as a young girl, we said a prayer before each meal and bedtime and we always said, let us always be mindful of the needs of others. And I just thought of that when you mentioned Ukraine and what it must be like there. My prayers for you, them and others suffering. You are so sweet! ! I can't thank you enough for you kind review and comments. They mean a lot to me. Thanks my dear friend!
