Disappearances Theory
Two guys in a bar discussing disappearances from the factory2 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think you did well being out of your comfort zone. This is a well written contest entry and I, for one, enjoyed reading. I want to wish you the best of luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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I think you did well being out of your comfort zone. This is a well written contest entry and I, for one, enjoyed reading. I want to wish you the best of luck with this contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you. I always appreciate your feedback. I have learned so much from you thru this website. Thanks for reading,
Comment from Ulla
It is really well written and well told. You have nothing to worry about. I'm impressed if this is your first attempt on dialogue only writing. It's a great writing exercise to do. A great entry for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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It is really well written and well told. You have nothing to worry about. I'm impressed if this is your first attempt on dialogue only writing. It's a great writing exercise to do. A great entry for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review and for reading. I appreciate it very much.
