My Time Draws Nigh
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Comment from mermaids
I admire your determination to keep writing poetry. This is a poem that makes me feel good. I like the line about making new friends, so true and good advice. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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I admire your determination to keep writing poetry. This is a poem that makes me feel good. I like the line about making new friends, so true and good advice. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from WalkerMan
Jay, you inspire us -- especially those nearing or over eighty -- with your continuing positive outlook. We see you as a wise friend writing fine poems with good rhyme, undimmed by the passage of years.
Superb. Stay safe and well, and keep those poems coming. :)) -- Mike
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Jay, you inspire us -- especially those nearing or over eighty -- with your continuing positive outlook. We see you as a wise friend writing fine poems with good rhyme, undimmed by the passage of years.
Superb. Stay safe and well, and keep those poems coming. :)) -- Mike
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jake,
It's great to see you posting such wonderful poems filled with rhyme,
as well as your themes of love, trust, and compassion.
Poetry is a pillar for many, a special and unique art form
that you can carry with you.
Well done.
Best wishes for a joyous holiday.
Robert
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Hello Jake,
It's great to see you posting such wonderful poems filled with rhyme,
as well as your themes of love, trust, and compassion.
Poetry is a pillar for many, a special and unique art form
that you can carry with you.
Well done.
Best wishes for a joyous holiday.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from amahra
I love your poems and shun the days when your writing them will end. Please find a way to keep them up on FanStory so we can revisit them. So we welcome them.
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I love your poems and shun the days when your writing them will end. Please find a way to keep them up on FanStory so we can revisit them. So we welcome them.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from Cedar
Hello Jay,
Another great one Jay...Just keep writing wnd we will keep reading.
I think God has plans for you to keep writing until you are well over 100.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours, my friend...Bill
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Hello Jay,
Another great one Jay...Just keep writing wnd we will keep reading.
I think God has plans for you to keep writing until you are well over 100.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours, my friend...Bill
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely poem as usual, but please don't think that way. You may have many years left, it's up to God to decide. It may be terribly selfish of me, but I don't want to lose your wonderful outlook on life through your poetry. Stay with us as long as you can.
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This is a lovely poem as usual, but please don't think that way. You may have many years left, it's up to God to decide. It may be terribly selfish of me, but I don't want to lose your wonderful outlook on life through your poetry. Stay with us as long as you can.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Your poem is sad, but I oh so loved it, I was wondering in your title if you meant to write "night" you had my attention in the first sentence. May God grat your wishes and give you so much life beyond your years
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Your poem is sad, but I oh so loved it, I was wondering in your title if you meant to write "night" you had my attention in the first sentence. May God grat your wishes and give you so much life beyond your years
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jay, I pray those final days
my sweet friend...are long down the road..
I enjoy reading your poems of love and
compassion...
love your poem you...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
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Hi Jay, I pray those final days
my sweet friend...are long down the road..
I enjoy reading your poems of love and
compassion...
love your poem you...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
Comment from Raul1
This is a thoughtful and interesting poem you have penned here. I think that for definitely you will be in God's Kingdom. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
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This is a thoughtful and interesting poem you have penned here. I think that for definitely you will be in God's Kingdom. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
Comment from Rickie1
I hope you're not foretelling the future? I like reading your words and you inspire me so hang in there. I can only hope I can be writing anything when I'm 97!
Ho HO HO Merry Merry
Rickie
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I hope you're not foretelling the future? I like reading your words and you inspire me so hang in there. I can only hope I can be writing anything when I'm 97!
Ho HO HO Merry Merry
Rickie
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
