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Sleepy Sloths

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4 total reviews 
Comment from Kaiku
Excellent
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Pee and Poo, you don`t say. Way to go with your win. There is always such a back story to your works. Has that always been the case? Are you a secret research scientist on the brink of curing cancer? Good stuff Tempeste.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
    Ciao! Glad you found my sloth poem interesting. Thank you for the top score.

    I like to watch nature programmes like National Geographic ..also during the first lockdown in Feb2020 I found WildEarth which is live from South Africa. You get to see the animals in their true habitat and the rangers explain a lot. You get to know the various prides and members. They show kills which are part of everyday life on the reserve.

    Here is a link , once you have opened it, below the link press "show more" and you can see the different times/sightings and choose what interests you most. Uploaded are also other past months of this year. The rangers start filming at sunrise to midday (they avoid the hottest part of the day)and return at sunset when there is a lot of movement at the river, dam etc.

    Enjoy!

Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Congratulations on the win
in my alliteration contest,
tempest. This is a superb
alliteration poem about
sloths. My grandchildren
love sloths. Happy Holidays!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
    Ciao,

    I enjoyed writing it.

    Thank you for the kind words and the shiny stars. I love sloths too despite their fur is a living ecosystem.

    This is a video I used in one of my past 5-7-5 sloth poems' . For your grandkids!

    Buon Natale!

Comment from RodG
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I really enjoyed this poem about sloths. Because it is very informative and you used alliteration so effectively, it should appeal to readers of all ages. Good luck in the contest. Rod

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
    Despite their fur is full of algae and house insects I think sloths are cute.

    I appreciate the positive feedback , I have read many of your beautiful poems so your kind words mean a lot to me.

    Thank you and keep safe! I hope you checked out the video below?
reply by RodG on 19-Dec-2022
    I truly appreciate the compliments on my poems. Rod
Comment from Ricky1024
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I like this short story about the sloth.
And,I knew that they come down from the tree very slowly to defecate.
Yes, and that was basically the only time.
Yes but I never knew that when they did.
That they were prey to the nasty creatures awaiting them below!
So cruel!
Well written and God luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
    Glad my poem offered more insight on this cute creature.

    At least 50 percent of sloths are killed on the ground. Good thing they only go down once a week( sigh)

    Thank you for reading my poem.

    Hope you checked out the videos in note section.

    Keep safe !