Birth Of The Promise
A glimpse of who Jesus is48 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
Great interpretation of the reason for, and the glory of the birth of Jesus.
"To fulfill the Father's will," a poignant phrase!
The night before His passion, Jesus prayed and asked if God, His Father, would spare him 'the cup,' but said, "nevertheless, Your will be done."
The pain and suffering of the brutal sacrifice on the cross is not realized by many Christians, however, the rise of Christ on the third day is universally celebrated.
irish
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Great interpretation of the reason for, and the glory of the birth of Jesus.
"To fulfill the Father's will," a poignant phrase!
The night before His passion, Jesus prayed and asked if God, His Father, would spare him 'the cup,' but said, "nevertheless, Your will be done."
The pain and suffering of the brutal sacrifice on the cross is not realized by many Christians, however, the rise of Christ on the third day is universally celebrated.
irish
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
Comment from Jim Wile
This is a beautifully written poem. One does not even have to be a believer to appreciate the artistry and message of the poem. You've captured the essence of the birth of Christ perfectly, and that is a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany it. Very well-done.
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This is a beautifully written poem. One does not even have to be a believer to appreciate the artistry and message of the poem. You've captured the essence of the birth of Christ perfectly, and that is a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany it. Very well-done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Birth of a Promise tells the beautiful story of our lord's birth in a creative way. I particularly liked the last line.
Well done
Blessings for a happy New Year
Janet
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Birth of a Promise tells the beautiful story of our lord's birth in a creative way. I particularly liked the last line.
Well done
Blessings for a happy New Year
Janet
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
Comment from Aussie
Very well done. From the outside looking in, you have penned the story of His birth. I think (with respect) it would read more easily as quatrains, giving pause between stanza's. Four lines then a break. Good luck with your contest entry. K xx
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Very well done. From the outside looking in, you have penned the story of His birth. I think (with respect) it would read more easily as quatrains, giving pause between stanza's. Four lines then a break. Good luck with your contest entry. K xx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the review and input.
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful and so appropriate for all!
Thank you for sharing and I pray that we all see and follow the Star that leads us to an eternity of peace and happiness.
Hugs, Carol
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Beautiful and so appropriate for all!
Thank you for sharing and I pray that we all see and follow the Star that leads us to an eternity of peace and happiness.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning PenofFire. I enjoyed reading your very well-written poem about Jesus and his birth. You did an exemplary job on the content, structure, theme and addressing the prompt. Very well done.
Melissa
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Good morning PenofFire. I enjoyed reading your very well-written poem about Jesus and his birth. You did an exemplary job on the content, structure, theme and addressing the prompt. Very well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
A unique way to describe what happened over two thousand years ago in a manger in Bethlehem. "When Promise came to earth"??? What have we done?
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A unique way to describe what happened over two thousand years ago in a manger in Bethlehem. "When Promise came to earth"??? What have we done?
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from jmdg1954
Writer,
Your poem captured the essence of Christmas, its true meaning in a few short sentences.
I enjoyed this line -
"Breathless silence filled the universe
As all waited to hear the first cries of hope"
Well done, my friend. John
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Writer,
Your poem captured the essence of Christmas, its true meaning in a few short sentences.
I enjoyed this line -
"Breathless silence filled the universe
As all waited to hear the first cries of hope"
Well done, my friend. John
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from Kayte Ray
Well written
Flows beautifully and was a joy to read.
Your presentation is a great use of contrast and image to assist in the presentation of your piece.
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Well written
Flows beautifully and was a joy to read.
Your presentation is a great use of contrast and image to assist in the presentation of your piece.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
Comment from godlucifer
heaven welcome us with open arms. heaven fulfill our destiny as jesus was born. the birth of jesus is the birth of christ and it is also the birth of the people. your poem was a talent write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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heaven welcome us with open arms. heaven fulfill our destiny as jesus was born. the birth of jesus is the birth of christ and it is also the birth of the people. your poem was a talent write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
