Abigail
A Little life that Almost Was47 total reviews
Comment from lavendermoon14
This poem is heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. One of the most difficult moments of a hard time is watching the normally stoic person break down. Thank you for sharing your gift.
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This poem is heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. One of the most difficult moments of a hard time is watching the normally stoic person break down. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from Ric Myworld
What an outstanding poem and picture combination, and your words have painted a lingering scene that I'll not soon forget. A time I truly wish I had a six.
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What an outstanding poem and picture combination, and your words have painted a lingering scene that I'll not soon forget. A time I truly wish I had a six.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from LovnPeace
What a lovely story in poetic form.So sorry for your great loss. Just don't be in a hurry irish. we need you with us. WE need all the good people we can keep. Blessings and Merry Christms my friend. XO. B
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What a lovely story in poetic form.So sorry for your great loss. Just don't be in a hurry irish. we need you with us. WE need all the good people we can keep. Blessings and Merry Christms my friend. XO. B
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from MissMerri
Such a beautiful, touching poem, Irish! I read it several times and each time felt the strong emotion you put into this. You have chosen just the exact right words to convey the sadness of losing a little girl while clinging to her rare and unique beauty. She was yours, and now you have made her ours as well. Thank you for this lovely poem. I think it is a masterpiece.
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Such a beautiful, touching poem, Irish! I read it several times and each time felt the strong emotion you put into this. You have chosen just the exact right words to convey the sadness of losing a little girl while clinging to her rare and unique beauty. She was yours, and now you have made her ours as well. Thank you for this lovely poem. I think it is a masterpiece.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Well, I have no six to offer, but I will certainly vote for this stunning poem when it is nominated for poem of the month. A masterpiece. Congratulations on such fine work in free verse poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Irish.
Sal XOs
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Well, I have no six to offer, but I will certainly vote for this stunning poem when it is nominated for poem of the month. A masterpiece. Congratulations on such fine work in free verse poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Irish.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from estory
I liked your poem. It speaks of life after death, really, the triumph of the spirit over the forces of the physical world and its borders. Here the little girl who has passed away is waiting for you in another world, a world of springtime flowers and wide expansive landscapes, speaking of a time of reconnection with those she has left behind. It is the timeless hope of all mankind, to be reunited with departed loved ones. Loved the sober, honest voice here, the appropriate melancholy air, and the pastoral romantic images were brilliant. estory
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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I liked your poem. It speaks of life after death, really, the triumph of the spirit over the forces of the physical world and its borders. Here the little girl who has passed away is waiting for you in another world, a world of springtime flowers and wide expansive landscapes, speaking of a time of reconnection with those she has left behind. It is the timeless hope of all mankind, to be reunited with departed loved ones. Loved the sober, honest voice here, the appropriate melancholy air, and the pastoral romantic images were brilliant. estory
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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I am humbled. Thank you for reading, your heartfelt words of commentary, and the galaxy of stars! This was a tribute on her birthday.
irish
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow. What a beautiful verse you have created out of grief. The rhyming, the flow, the imagery all move us through your words effortlessly and bring us to a place of peace. This poem is a gift to those who lose their loved ones too early. Merry Christmas.
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Wow. What a beautiful verse you have created out of grief. The rhyming, the flow, the imagery all move us through your words effortlessly and bring us to a place of peace. This poem is a gift to those who lose their loved ones too early. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Irish,
This is a lovely poem about a profound hurt. I'm sorry for your loss.
Writing does heal, and by sharing this work, maybe you can ease your pain and the pain of someone else who experienced this.
Exceptional poem!
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Irish,
This is a lovely poem about a profound hurt. I'm sorry for your loss.
Writing does heal, and by sharing this work, maybe you can ease your pain and the pain of someone else who experienced this.
Exceptional poem!
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Cindy, I am humbled. Thank you for reading, your heartfelt comments, and the galaxy of stars!
irish
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so very sad and touching and I am so sorry for your loss. Your words here evoke longing and deep grief and it saddens me when a child dies and does not have the chance at life, a moving write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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This is so very sad and touching and I am so sorry for your loss. Your words here evoke longing and deep grief and it saddens me when a child dies and does not have the chance at life, a moving write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Hi, Dolly, thank you for reading, your kind words, and all the stars!
It's a wound that never heals.
irish
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh, no. This was a bittersweet poem about a life snuffed out so early. I thought it was fiction until I read your author notes. This was so sad. You have penned a breathtaking poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Oh, no. This was a bittersweet poem about a life snuffed out so early. I thought it was fiction until I read your author notes. This was so sad. You have penned a breathtaking poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Gretchen, for reading, your kind comments, and all the stars!
irish
