Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "No Benny Around "Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
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Comment from lancellot
I think these stories work for children in late elementary. It is easy to follow and understand. It may be better to show a bit more, than telling them. They have active imaginations and can visualize quickly.
Willow told Bea that talking about what she missed would help.
- would it be better to show this?
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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I think these stories work for children in late elementary. It is easy to follow and understand. It may be better to show a bit more, than telling them. They have active imaginations and can visualize quickly.
Willow told Bea that talking about what she missed would help.
- would it be better to show this?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your involved review.
