Different Perspectives
a 60 word Dash19 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Loved it, Melissa. I could see this happening. The
picture was perfect. I could understand her confusion--
either real or made up. What a fun little story.
Congratulations on winning, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Loved it, Melissa. I could see this happening. The
picture was perfect. I could understand her confusion--
either real or made up. What a fun little story.
Congratulations on winning, Jan
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hi there Jan. I am so glad you share in the humor with me. It was a fun write!
Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
Congratulations for this well deserved win!
It was a delightful read , it made me chuckle!
Best wishes for a serene
Natale /Christmas with your loved ones.( smiles)
Take care!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Ciao Sugarray!
Congratulations for this well deserved win!
It was a delightful read , it made me chuckle!
Best wishes for a serene
Natale /Christmas with your loved ones.( smiles)
Take care!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Buona Natale, Franca. I hope you have a wonderful and blessed day!! Thank you so much for the fun review.
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest.
Good word count and smooth flow easy to follow.
Excellent flash fiction.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Wonderful entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest.
Good word count and smooth flow easy to follow.
Excellent flash fiction.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you Gypsy.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Hahaha.... This is a good and funny 60-word dash entry. The story is clearly stated. The text could be one or two sizes larger. It is dwarfed by the visual. The visual works perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Hahaha.... This is a good and funny 60-word dash entry. The story is clearly stated. The text could be one or two sizes larger. It is dwarfed by the visual. The visual works perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Sandra!!
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You are welcome. I voted for it. It made me laugh.😆
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Sure bet!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a clever poem. Yes, hymn and him do rhyme; so you have written a hilarious story. I had to grin when reading your story. I can imagine the person was surprised when you answered.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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what a clever poem. Yes, hymn and him do rhyme; so you have written a hilarious story. I had to grin when reading your story. I can imagine the person was surprised when you answered.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Rosemary.
Comment from Bill Schott
This sixty-word story, Different Perspectives, has the proper word count and has a bit of pun with some HIMonyms from the sweet older lady in the front row of church. Cute.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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This sixty-word story, Different Perspectives, has the proper word count and has a bit of pun with some HIMonyms from the sweet older lady in the front row of church. Cute.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Haha... Bill you are too funny!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
One of my favorite literary techniques is word play. The crux and core of the humor of this vignette is word play. It is fun how you threw the reader way off. With your word limit you did even better. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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One of my favorite literary techniques is word play. The crux and core of the humor of this vignette is word play. It is fun how you threw the reader way off. With your word limit you did even better. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. That's very clever, and I bet she was quick-witted and humorous enough to know exactly what she was doing. An excellent short story - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Lol. That's very clever, and I bet she was quick-witted and humorous enough to know exactly what she was doing. An excellent short story - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Outrageously funny, it took me a few seconds to comprehend, and when I did, I couldn't stop bursting in laughter. Very, very clever twist!
Good luck with the contest!!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Outrageously funny, it took me a few seconds to comprehend, and when I did, I couldn't stop bursting in laughter. Very, very clever twist!
Good luck with the contest!!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
How very cute. Clean and remarkably understandable. Good luck with the entry and now for the rest of the needed characters I o p l k j h g f d s a w w e r y y u m n b v c x z
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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How very cute. Clean and remarkably understandable. Good luck with the entry and now for the rest of the needed characters I o p l k j h g f d s a w w e r y y u m n b v c x z
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much!
