Comment from Jesse James Doty

Exceptional

What a surprise finish line! I love this! The oldest woman in the church picks three hims instead of hymns! What a laugh! This comes completely unexpected and I love what it must do the all the readers of this post. Thank you for turning us upside down with a roar of laughter. This most definitely should win the contest!
Jesse

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much, Jesse!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is a well written and humorous short story that has been told many, many times. TV evangelists like to use this story as an introduction to their sermon. Your selected picture pairs perfectly and intensifies your message. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thank you so much!

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, Dang, I need to go to that church, I might get picked! Or maybe I could do the her picking. This is a great sixty-word dash story for this contest, there are some good entries, but this could do well. Terry.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!

reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!

reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I got a kick out of this - I laughed aloud! This was a fun, entertaining short short story. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Jess!!

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Jess!!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is clever and well told. I think Sister Peggy knew exactly what she was saying. A good chuckle in so few words ... not an easy task. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!

reply by Mary Shifman on 23-Dec-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Different Perspectives"
This is a 60 Word Dash Poetry Contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery, it also read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is so fun and I can see my mother doing the same. A delightful read in super short flash fiction. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!!

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

I'm still laughing as I'm am sending this to you.

Perfect... Sister Peggy, the oldest, chose a hymn, picks him, him snd him!

Best of luck in the Dash contest. You have a winner here...

Cheers, John

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

You did it! In sixty words you set us up for some unexpected humor in a nicely sequenced short story. This made me smile. Well done. Merry Christmas to you.

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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!!