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Poetry For Christmas, pen 10

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "A Christmas Wish"
assorted styles of poems about Christmas

6 total reviews 
Comment from evilynne
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Such a great heartfelt Christmas wish! Your poem is well written, interesting reading. The picture and background are lovely. Evi

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022

Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful prayer, Dawn. He will use any of us who are willing. Your poem is meaningful, thoughtful and thought-provoking, and from the heart. My only comment is that the font is a bit hard to read. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2022

Comment from damommy
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Lovely prayer we should all be saying. Beautifully written from your heart. If only the people of all religions to come together and make peace. I wish you and Cleo the best Christmas ever!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022

Comment from Ricky1024
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I like how you brought peace into your Christmas poetry.
Good health peace on Earth Goodwill to all Mankind.
No more war.
No more 2000 Year Unholy War over land rights oil and religion.
Brotherhood is good, if we only Could?
If we again Do what we Should?
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed Christmas.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022

Comment from Paul McFarland
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What a wonderful idea - peace throughout the world. I don't know if this will happen in our lifetime, but it should happen sometime in the future. If it doesn't, mankind will destroy itself.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully written prayer/poem. I also pray for world peace. Just think of the wonderful world we would live in if we could all live in harmony. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022