Forgive
Poetry ~ amphibrach meter8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This forgiveness poem, Forgive, is a nicely metered and rhymed entreaty for the releasing of those stressful emotions which do more self-harm than anything else.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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This forgiveness poem, Forgive, is a nicely metered and rhymed entreaty for the releasing of those stressful emotions which do more self-harm than anything else.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you Bill!! Appreciate it.
Melissa
Comment from jessizero
I definitely would forgive the person who has hurt me so deeply, but I would never put myself through trusting him again. Maybe it's someplace in the middle. I appreciate your poem, especially the last line. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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I definitely would forgive the person who has hurt me so deeply, but I would never put myself through trusting him again. Maybe it's someplace in the middle. I appreciate your poem, especially the last line. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very beautiful poem, flows really well, carries a deep meaning, even with the amphbrach metre, which in itself is an exploit!!!
Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Very beautiful poem, flows really well, carries a deep meaning, even with the amphbrach metre, which in itself is an exploit!!!
Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Mario!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have successfully treated the subject of forgiveness in poetry form. You describe well how difficult it can be to forgive, but then the relief that follows when we unburden our hearts. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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You have successfully treated the subject of forgiveness in poetry form. You describe well how difficult it can be to forgive, but then the relief that follows when we unburden our hearts. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you Ginda!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a well-written poem for this contest, good luck. The two stanzas work well together. I also think a strength of the poem is the message that even if someone underserving is forgiven, the real beneficiary is the crusty heart. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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This is a well-written poem for this contest, good luck. The two stanzas work well together. I also think a strength of the poem is the message that even if someone underserving is forgiven, the real beneficiary is the crusty heart. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Terry!
Comment from lancellot
I am not sure about all the unstressed and unstress meter stuff, but I can recognize a well crafted piece with a solid rhyme scheme and understandable and logical message. Agree or disagree, one cannot deny the feeling of truth.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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I am not sure about all the unstressed and unstress meter stuff, but I can recognize a well crafted piece with a solid rhyme scheme and understandable and logical message. Agree or disagree, one cannot deny the feeling of truth.
Good entry.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thanks so very much!!
Comment from patricia dillon
You articulate perfectly the importance of forgiveness for wrongs one may have suffered. Holding onto bitterness will only harm oneself. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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You articulate perfectly the importance of forgiveness for wrongs one may have suffered. Holding onto bitterness will only harm oneself. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Patricia :)
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You're welcome
Comment from jaded831
Your poem lets us see forgiving others for their bad deeds against you, frees you actually more. Great lesson we all should learn. Your poem also teaches by holding on to hate, you become less of a good person. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Your poem lets us see forgiving others for their bad deeds against you, frees you actually more. Great lesson we all should learn. Your poem also teaches by holding on to hate, you become less of a good person. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for your review.
