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100 Word Story contest entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written short story for th 100 word flash fiction. You used very good words and then all of a sudden you get stopped with your flow of thinking. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Teri. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

    :)

    Ron
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Oh my gosh, this is a fun flash fiction, describing an all too familiar scene that plays out in our writer homes. Very clever to use this scene for inspiration. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Ginda. I actually added the Santa hat into the pic to make it more Christmasy. Lol. I love playing in my art program nearly as much as writing. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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and your reply was or wished to be???
I think the two of we may or not be similar for Christmas no longer nor ever has meant much to me save for praising my God, my King. That's my story, and I am sticking to it just in case God is listening.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
    Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Tom. Yep, that's the only real reason for the season. I appreciate the stop in, friend. I hope your Christmas is going great.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Exceptional
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I like the humour here! There is nowhere to hide at Christmas. Writing is not a festive occupation and family reunions come first. Well done on making necessity the mother of invention!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
    Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Sarah. If this were actually true, I'm sure I wouldn't even have gotten the chance to come in here. She would have been blocking the door like a football player. Haha. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating, Sarah. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Comment from lancellot
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I see you went with the classic fourth wall break, where you couldn't think of anything for the contest. That a good choice, I've seen some entries that did that thing, do okay in most contests.

I wish you luck in the voting, and enjoy your Christmas.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2022
    Lol. I could have come up with something but that was the first dumb idea that popped in my head so I ran with it. Haha. Someone blowing off their family today to be on here. Thank you for the great review and stars, friend. I hope your Christmas is going great.