Two Old Coots
a 100 word story34 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Robin
Thank you for sharing this post. I think I liked it because I am older than dirt also. But, I am grateful to be alive thanks to Tylenol for the arthritis. Your story is very written and made me know that I am not alone. Sarah
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you for sharing this post. I think I liked it because I am older than dirt also. But, I am grateful to be alive thanks to Tylenol for the arthritis. Your story is very written and made me know that I am not alone. Sarah
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sarah. I appreciate your praise, but wish you did not have to experience "cruel aging" like the narrator of my story. Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Two Old Coots, has the required word count and reminds the readers that time is good and should be enjoyed while it lasts.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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This one-hundred-word story, Two Old Coots, has the required word count and reminds the readers that time is good and should be enjoyed while it lasts.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Indeed we need to relish the time God?s given us. Thanks, Bill, for sharing my story. Rod
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice, relatable piece. Good work.
I particularly like the line about 'you shoulda seen him in his prime.' I had a previous life and wish my wife could have seen my friends and family back when...
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Very nice, relatable piece. Good work.
I particularly like the line about 'you shoulda seen him in his prime.' I had a previous life and wish my wife could have seen my friends and family back when...
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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I am glad you could relate to my narrator, Wayne. Many thanks for sharing and praising my story. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that's sad. I loved the dialectal speech you used for your narrator. I especially liked that even the tail wagging made both dog and owner wince. I hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Oh, that's sad. I loved the dialectal speech you used for your narrator. I especially liked that even the tail wagging made both dog and owner wince. I hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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I am delighted you enjoyed the dialect in my sad story, lyenochka, Many thanks for your well wishes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author.
It had smooth flow and interesting details and
topic. I liked how the man and dog aged together.
Readers could easily tell the man and the dog loved
one anther.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author.
It had smooth flow and interesting details and
topic. I liked how the man and dog aged together.
Readers could easily tell the man and the dog loved
one anther.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Jan, for sharing and praising my story. Indeed the two old coots do love each other.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your chosen picture is rich in imagery, and pairs perfectly with your 100 word flash fiction entry. People age and pets age, both experiencing aches and pains and disability. We should have seen Abner when he was a pup, and the man when he was a young scout. It's unbelievable what aging will do. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Your chosen picture is rich in imagery, and pairs perfectly with your 100 word flash fiction entry. People age and pets age, both experiencing aches and pains and disability. We should have seen Abner when he was a pup, and the man when he was a young scout. It's unbelievable what aging will do. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for sharing and praising my story. As the old coot says, "Aging?s cruel." I?ve found nothing "golden" about the Golden Years.
Comment from poetwatch
Two old friends always comfort one another, author. Glad to know that you're still alive and kicking. You penned a good story and I hope you're still alive after you win. :) This is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Two old friends always comfort one another, author. Glad to know that you're still alive and kicking. You penned a good story and I hope you're still alive after you win. :) This is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, poetwatch, for sharing and praising my poem. I?m feeling spry, so hope I will still be around to collect any contest prizes. Those six bright stars are much appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 100 Word Flash Fiction Contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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I sometimes at age 68 could be considered an old fart or old coot.
Yes, but you're only as old as you feel inside.
Yes, and the way you present yourself outside! Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This is a 100 Word Flash Fiction Contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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I sometimes at age 68 could be considered an old fart or old coot.
Yes, but you're only as old as you feel inside.
Yes, and the way you present yourself outside! Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Doctor Ricky, for sharing and praising my story.
Comment from jaded831
Sad, true to life, well written, who can ask for more. I myself am in my so called years, and have had many pets die of old age. I really can relate to every word. The picture is perfect. Together they make an excellent presentation.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Sad, true to life, well written, who can ask for more. I myself am in my so called years, and have had many pets die of old age. I really can relate to every word. The picture is perfect. Together they make an excellent presentation.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for sharing and praising my story. Sadly, most pet owners can relate to this narrator.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I don't usually post six stars for short entries, but this had a beginning, end and story line I enjoyed. I could be the character herein. Well done. .....................................
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I don't usually post six stars for short entries, but this had a beginning, end and story line I enjoyed. I could be the character herein. Well done. .....................................
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Tom, thank you so much for awarding my story six stars. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Sadly, most pet owners can relate to the narrator atone time or another.
