A Baby Soldier Memoir/ Entry 4
An unexpected turn22 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
This is a powerful chapter! The engagement between Zora and Lubora set the stage for the narrative and sign dialogue between Zora and Luka.
Luka's obvious attraction to Zora was an interesting side, adding just the right touch of an all too human emotion to the narrative.
Lubora's takedown was a satisfying ending.
Good work,
irish
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This is a powerful chapter! The engagement between Zora and Lubora set the stage for the narrative and sign dialogue between Zora and Luka.
Luka's obvious attraction to Zora was an interesting side, adding just the right touch of an all too human emotion to the narrative.
Lubora's takedown was a satisfying ending.
Good work,
irish
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Irish. I always look forward to hearing from you.
Comment from royowen
It's funny, we sometimes don't know who we are talking to unless someone makes if clear. I like the fact Lubora didn't know who she was dealing with until Luke, presumably her boss was very respectful to Zora, now she's anger management classes and signing lessons committed to her, sooner than lose her job, beautifully written John, blessings Roy
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It's funny, we sometimes don't know who we are talking to unless someone makes if clear. I like the fact Lubora didn't know who she was dealing with until Luke, presumably her boss was very respectful to Zora, now she's anger management classes and signing lessons committed to her, sooner than lose her job, beautifully written John, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Roy. I'm always grateful when you follow my work and look forward to your reviews.
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Most welcome
