One Thousand Cranes
Viewing comments for Chapter 200 "Wisp of Winter"Gypsy's Favorites
26 total reviews
Comment from estory
You are getting more consistent at excellence in this form. Loved the balance, the nature image, and the subtlety in the epiphany moment. It all seems so tenuous, ephemeral, a moment of beauty hanging by a thread in the morning light. But that dawn speaks of hope, of promise, turning a corner. It's a nice deep image. estory
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
  |
You are getting more consistent at excellence in this form. Loved the balance, the nature image, and the subtlety in the epiphany moment. It all seems so tenuous, ephemeral, a moment of beauty hanging by a thread in the morning light. But that dawn speaks of hope, of promise, turning a corner. It's a nice deep image. estory
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"May you live long and prosper." -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Tom Horonzy
To accomplish the ratings you have on FS, comes as no surprise, as it seems you are working on something twenty-four seven. I appreciate your effort to entertain and educate those who lag behind you in many contests. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
To accomplish the ratings you have on FS, comes as no surprise, as it seems you are working on something twenty-four seven. I appreciate your effort to entertain and educate those who lag behind you in many contests. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"May you live long and prosper." -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I must read more of your lovely poems and get to understand the rules of your short ones. This was so lovely, the words delicate and sweet. I think this should do very well in this contest. Well done, and good luck! :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
I must read more of your lovely poems and get to understand the rules of your short ones. This was so lovely, the words delicate and sweet. I think this should do very well in this contest. Well done, and good luck! :)) Sandra
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"May you live long and prosper." -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Kaiku
Lovely as usual. The artwork so well fits your prose. Always a pleasure reading your work and taking a lesson at the same time. We all have our ways and guidance provides a clean path.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
Lovely as usual. The artwork so well fits your prose. Always a pleasure reading your work and taking a lesson at the same time. We all have our ways and guidance provides a clean path.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei
"May you live long and prosper." -- Spock, Star Trek
Comment from Karyn2
What a marvellous image to base 15 exquisite syllable around!! I love the alliteration and the feeling of suspense/bated breath waiting as the day warms that would break this crisp moment in time and send the dew drop plummeting from the frosted stem. Stunning imagery. I wish I had more 6's to award truly amazing and standout writing. I'm just all out.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
What a marvellous image to base 15 exquisite syllable around!! I love the alliteration and the feeling of suspense/bated breath waiting as the day warms that would break this crisp moment in time and send the dew drop plummeting from the frosted stem. Stunning imagery. I wish I had more 6's to award truly amazing and standout writing. I'm just all out.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful poem about a dewdrop and the winter. You use amazing artwork here. Your presentation is great as usual. I love your appreciation of the winter. I sincerely wish you good luck for the contest.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
 |
What a beautiful poem about a dewdrop and the winter. You use amazing artwork here. Your presentation is great as usual. I love your appreciation of the winter. I sincerely wish you good luck for the contest.
Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Lisa,
Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. You're very kind.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. The dual pictures were beautiful and the fit the scene perfectly. Your words proved the phenomenal artist that you are. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. The dual pictures were beautiful and the fit the scene perfectly. Your words proved the phenomenal artist that you are. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Blessed be and hugs!
Gypsy Sensei
-
Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-I like the premise in the opening lines.
-A good concluding line gives the setting.
-A good entry; good luck, and have a great New Year!!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-I like the premise in the opening lines.
-A good concluding line gives the setting.
-A good entry; good luck, and have a great New Year!!!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Happy New Year too.
Gypsy Sensei
-
You are very welcome, Gypsy, and thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This picture went so perfectly with your poem. I liked the feel of the word wisp. It was brief and light, the way a drop of dew would be. Everything about your poem showed the fleeting moment. It was a testimony to the quick miracles that are constant in nature. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
This picture went so perfectly with your poem. I liked the feel of the word wisp. It was brief and light, the way a drop of dew would be. Everything about your poem showed the fleeting moment. It was a testimony to the quick miracles that are constant in nature. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful - in words and in presentation. The alliteration is subtle and works well also. This has an excellent chance of success, and I send good wishes for a win.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
|
Beautiful - in words and in presentation. The alliteration is subtle and works well also. This has an excellent chance of success, and I send good wishes for a win.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
-
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
