Unexpected Visitor
We're never ready22 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a great job you have done creating this story through dialog alone. You have covered all the emotions and our human frailty. But is anyone ever really ready when they feel that have more life to live. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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What a great job you have done creating this story through dialog alone. You have covered all the emotions and our human frailty. But is anyone ever really ready when they feel that have more life to live. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I guess you're right. We're never ready. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Nice story. Very interesting and well written. The Dialogue is very sharp and moves the story fast, and there is an element of suspense which ends with us imagining what might have happened.
Well done
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Nice story. Very interesting and well written. The Dialogue is very sharp and moves the story fast, and there is an element of suspense which ends with us imagining what might have happened.
Well done
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for reading, Mario.
