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Haiku (summer's sunflowers)

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15 total reviews 
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I have lived near fields of sunflowers and with this haiku you have captured the radiance of "smiles." I don't believe anyone can escape their cheerfulness.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Thank you for your lovely review. They are not as highly esteemed as some flowers and yet they are very complex in structure, have their own charm, and definitely are strong and cheerful.
Comment from Karyn2
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I love sunflowers and you have described them so well in such few words. Nodding their heads, so sunny and bright and happy in feeling, these flowers certainly bring joy! I lovely 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Thank you Karyn. You understand perfectly. They are not as highly esteemed as some flowers, but they are bright and cheerful always, and eye-catching.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Only just three short months away and we will be basking in sunshine! Oh my.

This is nicely written and well done. Even the color scheme matches the theme that you are presenting here. Very good indeed!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Sunflowers are amazingly in tune with the sun and there movement during the day is fascinating, a fine Haiku bringing a little sunshine into my dull day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Thank you for a super review. Yes, I am appreciating their beauty and strength and cheerfulness more and more now that I have some in a corner of my garden.
Comment from lancellot
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nodding at the sun
golden heads bask in sunshine -
summer's cheerful smile

Well, it true, Sunflowers do at times look they are nodding at the sun. I think they follow the sun too. Not sure about that.

I think this is well done and matches what a Haiku should be about.

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
    Thank you for reviewing. And yes they do always turn to face the sun, and the summer breezes make them look like they are nodding.