A stranger
Feels like we always knew each other5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, A Stranger, has the proper formatting and suggests that when people click right away, the occurrence can be considered unique...........................................
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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This eight-word poem, A Stranger, has the proper formatting and suggests that when people click right away, the occurrence can be considered unique...........................................
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Mary Vigasin
At least to me, writing a poem in only eight words is difficult and writing with a strong message is even more challenging. Very well done. Creative and clever.
Meeting a stranger and realizing that you have always known each other is what I think love at first sight, can be.
One finds an immediate attraction because that person seems so familiar.
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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At least to me, writing a poem in only eight words is difficult and writing with a strong message is even more challenging. Very well done. Creative and clever.
Meeting a stranger and realizing that you have always known each other is what I think love at first sight, can be.
One finds an immediate attraction because that person seems so familiar.
Mary
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Comment from JT traveller
No clear direction. Circular in design. I did not find it emotive but best of luck in the competition. Perhaps more heartfelt words could be used in the future for greater impact.
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No clear direction. Circular in design. I did not find it emotive but best of luck in the competition. Perhaps more heartfelt words could be used in the future for greater impact.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
Comment from Karyn2
Oooh very good. I like the double use of "stranger" that is clever! I find this sort of thing happens when you are in a long queue and get chatting or on trains or buses and you start with general chit chat and then find you have something in common. Weddings are another example where I often find myself chatting to strangers at the table and we have all night to talk and find connections. Are terrific idea to base your 8 words upon!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Oooh very good. I like the double use of "stranger" that is clever! I find this sort of thing happens when you are in a long queue and get chatting or on trains or buses and you start with general chit chat and then find you have something in common. Weddings are another example where I often find myself chatting to strangers at the table and we have all night to talk and find connections. Are terrific idea to base your 8 words upon!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Karyn.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem has a spiritual overtone. Perhaps we met the stranger in another life, which makes for the instant connection. The experience is almost magical. The picture adds to your poem. Together they are awesome.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Your poem has a spiritual overtone. Perhaps we met the stranger in another life, which makes for the instant connection. The experience is almost magical. The picture adds to your poem. Together they are awesome.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much
