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Presence Of The Lord

Remember

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written 8 word poem you have penned about being in the presence of the Lord. What better place could we be? Best wishes in the contest. love, teri

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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    Thank you
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is very good poetic advise. A lot of us forget this often. That is why there is so much violence, indifference and discrimination in this world.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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    Thank you
reply by dragonpoet on 30-Dec-2022
    You?re welcome
    Joan
Comment from Karyn2
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This is a wonderful 8 word poem contender! I feel like this needs to be made into stickers and key rings tags, coffee mugs etc daily reminders throughout our lives that no matter where we are and what we are doing that we aught to pause and consider that we are in the presence of the living God. Would it change our actions? Would it change the way we speak to each other? So much to ponder! Really strong contender. Amazing. (I don't have any 6's left!)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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    Thank you...