A Flash of Blue
A Nonet39 total reviews
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Love your poem. You did a great job. The flow of your rhyme and descriptive words made me smile. I have several blue bird houses in my yard. They are my favorite.
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Love your poem. You did a great job. The flow of your rhyme and descriptive words made me smile. I have several blue bird houses in my yard. They are my favorite.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
What a beautiful picture. I like the blue birds. Do you write the poem after you pick the picture or you chose the picture after The poem.
Your poem Is full of energetic life. I can hear the birds singing too.
Thanks for sharing
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What a beautiful picture. I like the blue birds. Do you write the poem after you pick the picture or you chose the picture after The poem.
Your poem Is full of energetic life. I can hear the birds singing too.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much. I wrote the poem and then found the photo. I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from miajaffri
A perfect nonet with nine lines beginning with one syllable increasing one
each line with nine syllables on the last line. I like the subject and the
alliteration in the poem.
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A perfect nonet with nine lines beginning with one syllable increasing one
each line with nine syllables on the last line. I like the subject and the
alliteration in the poem.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
This is a very sweet and clever Nonet. I love that you chose Bluebirds as your subject. This time of year, people are starting to look forward to a hint of spring in some places. I expect that people in the middle states will be happy to read about Bluebirds. ;) Here today, on the Canadian border in New England, it's in the high 40's, it's rained, and the grass is looking pretty green. We had a little snow earlier in the week, but it's gone now.
Surprisingly your form came out in an almost perfect triangle! That's amazing! These don't always do that. Letters aren't always the right size to make that happen. You did a great job with that!
Happy New Year!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Hello Author,
This is a very sweet and clever Nonet. I love that you chose Bluebirds as your subject. This time of year, people are starting to look forward to a hint of spring in some places. I expect that people in the middle states will be happy to read about Bluebirds. ;) Here today, on the Canadian border in New England, it's in the high 40's, it's rained, and the grass is looking pretty green. We had a little snow earlier in the week, but it's gone now.
Surprisingly your form came out in an almost perfect triangle! That's amazing! These don't always do that. Letters aren't always the right size to make that happen. You did a great job with that!
Happy New Year!
Susan :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Susan.
Comment from Boogienights
This is really nice and it flows so well. Honestly, I think these type of poems are hard to write, but this one is done exceptionally well. In addition, I love birds so much, I think they are delicate yet strong and amazing. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is really nice and it flows so well. Honestly, I think these type of poems are hard to write, but this one is done exceptionally well. In addition, I love birds so much, I think they are delicate yet strong and amazing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Sharon!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a perfectly lovely nonet, and about the beautiful bluebirds. This is such a well written nonet that read aloud properly, rhymes so nicely. Very well done, and Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year! :)) Sandra xx
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What a perfectly lovely nonet, and about the beautiful bluebirds. This is such a well written nonet that read aloud properly, rhymes so nicely. Very well done, and Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Sandra.
Comment from Jim Wile
This is a very well done nonet about a subject near and dear to your heart. Isn't it interesting how such small things can have such a charming effect on us? It often goes back to a pleasant memory from our youth. Whenever I smell a clipped boxwood hedge, I'm immediately transported back in time to a pleasurable experience I had at summer day camp in my youth.
Very nice job.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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This is a very well done nonet about a subject near and dear to your heart. Isn't it interesting how such small things can have such a charming effect on us? It often goes back to a pleasant memory from our youth. Whenever I smell a clipped boxwood hedge, I'm immediately transported back in time to a pleasurable experience I had at summer day camp in my youth.
Very nice job.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you Jim... yes, I have many things that trigger associations... most of them pleasant!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I zealously zest to see if bluebirds nest near me. This is a lovely way to end this animal nonet. I also love bluebirds actually all birds I love to watch as they fly up in the sky. And I love animals generally as I love all of nature and the beasts and creatures who live on our planet. Thank you for showing us this lovely way of viewing our planet earth.
Jesse
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I zealously zest to see if bluebirds nest near me. This is a lovely way to end this animal nonet. I also love bluebirds actually all birds I love to watch as they fly up in the sky. And I love animals generally as I love all of nature and the beasts and creatures who live on our planet. Thank you for showing us this lovely way of viewing our planet earth.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Jesse.
Comment from JT traveller
Great poem. Fantastic imagery. I like it. Thankyou for sharing your poem. Are the bluebirds jumping or is it you jumping for joy? Nice poem to read to start my day. Thankyou.
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Great poem. Fantastic imagery. I like it. Thankyou for sharing your poem. Are the bluebirds jumping or is it you jumping for joy? Nice poem to read to start my day. Thankyou.
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written animal nonet about the beautiful blue birds. I keep seeing beautiful blue birds and cardinals in our yard. They are so pretty. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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This is a very beautiful and well written animal nonet about the beautiful blue birds. I keep seeing beautiful blue birds and cardinals in our yard. They are so pretty. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Teri!!
