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Eternal Fate

A six-word site contest entry

15 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. Good word count. I agree, soulmates love forever. Nice presentation. Goodluck!

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus


 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job with your six word poem!! Yes, the uniting of souls goes much deeper than the uniting of bodies. When two people love each other on a soul level, it really is forever. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, and yes love should be forever, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kayte Ray
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This is a beautiful message. You have conveyed very strong feeling in just a few words. Your presentation is outstanding. Wonderful graphic, use of color and font to convey your message

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Wow! Thank you so very much, I am so happy that you enjoyed this short read****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your art choice and descriptive words
paired perfectly, Kahpot. Great choices.
I liked how you used the words soul and
mate as tow words rather than q. Nature
is amazing. We could learn so much more
if we weren't so conceited to think we know
it all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, kahpot.
-You have used your six words well with a good topic.
-I like how you divide it with the premise of
souls uniting, and follow it with the outcome of that union.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Jan-2023
    You are always welcome!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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A lovely thought, well captured in poetry. The picture certainly complements the text. A good example of where few words can express profound thoughts!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 02-Jan-2023
    Happy New Year!
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 02-Jan-2023
    Happy New Year!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It's not just the birds who mate forever, but humans do it too. When we find someone we really connect with then we have love for the rest of our lives, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
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In a few words, you created a very nice expression of love.

Mark

P.S. Either in portrait or landscape mode, your text is not well aligned. IMHO it should appear as:

when souls unite --
mates live forever

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you Mark, I shall do that and see how it looks, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
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This six-word poem, Eternal Fate, has the proper formatting and finds the senses comingle to a point that we could not imagine being apart at any time within infinity.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
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Your words and stunning artwork create a beautiful piece that highlights the power of attraction and lasting bond that connect two soul mates. Very well done. Should place well in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
    Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot