Eternal Fate
A six-word site contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. Good word count. I agree, soulmates love forever. Nice presentation. Goodluck!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. Good word count. I agree, soulmates love forever. Nice presentation. Goodluck!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your six word poem!! Yes, the uniting of souls goes much deeper than the uniting of bodies. When two people love each other on a soul level, it really is forever. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Great job with your six word poem!! Yes, the uniting of souls goes much deeper than the uniting of bodies. When two people love each other on a soul level, it really is forever. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, and yes love should be forever, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kayte Ray
This is a beautiful message. You have conveyed very strong feeling in just a few words. Your presentation is outstanding. Wonderful graphic, use of color and font to convey your message
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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This is a beautiful message. You have conveyed very strong feeling in just a few words. Your presentation is outstanding. Wonderful graphic, use of color and font to convey your message
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I am so happy that you enjoyed this short read****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your art choice and descriptive words
paired perfectly, Kahpot. Great choices.
I liked how you used the words soul and
mate as tow words rather than q. Nature
is amazing. We could learn so much more
if we weren't so conceited to think we know
it all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Your art choice and descriptive words
paired perfectly, Kahpot. Great choices.
I liked how you used the words soul and
mate as tow words rather than q. Nature
is amazing. We could learn so much more
if we weren't so conceited to think we know
it all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, kahpot.
-You have used your six words well with a good topic.
-I like how you divide it with the premise of
souls uniting, and follow it with the outcome of that union.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, kahpot.
-You have used your six words well with a good topic.
-I like how you divide it with the premise of
souls uniting, and follow it with the outcome of that union.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are always welcome!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A lovely thought, well captured in poetry. The picture certainly complements the text. A good example of where few words can express profound thoughts!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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A lovely thought, well captured in poetry. The picture certainly complements the text. A good example of where few words can express profound thoughts!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Happy New Year!
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Happy New Year!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's not just the birds who mate forever, but humans do it too. When we find someone we really connect with then we have love for the rest of our lives, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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It's not just the birds who mate forever, but humans do it too. When we find someone we really connect with then we have love for the rest of our lives, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
In a few words, you created a very nice expression of love.
Mark
P.S. Either in portrait or landscape mode, your text is not well aligned. IMHO it should appear as:
when souls unite --
mates live forever
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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In a few words, you created a very nice expression of love.
Mark
P.S. Either in portrait or landscape mode, your text is not well aligned. IMHO it should appear as:
when souls unite --
mates live forever
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you Mark, I shall do that and see how it looks, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Eternal Fate, has the proper formatting and finds the senses comingle to a point that we could not imagine being apart at any time within infinity.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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This six-word poem, Eternal Fate, has the proper formatting and finds the senses comingle to a point that we could not imagine being apart at any time within infinity.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Your words and stunning artwork create a beautiful piece that highlights the power of attraction and lasting bond that connect two soul mates. Very well done. Should place well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Your words and stunning artwork create a beautiful piece that highlights the power of attraction and lasting bond that connect two soul mates. Very well done. Should place well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot