Winter Sprinkles
A poem22 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a wonderful use of fifteen syllables for the contest. I love that the snowflakes twinkle, as well as the frosted freckles. Beautiful imagery! best wishes in the contest, and blessings for the new year. Carol
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This is a wonderful use of fifteen syllables for the contest. I love that the snowflakes twinkle, as well as the frosted freckles. Beautiful imagery! best wishes in the contest, and blessings for the new year. Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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I really appreciate your lovely review on this wintertime piece, Carol. Thanks so very much!
Melissa
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You're welcome, Melissa. I enjoyed it.
The picture you included was cute!
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, we rarely get snow here at Christmas (if ever) but I could imagine this is what I would be doing, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Beautifully written and presented, we rarely get snow here at Christmas (if ever) but I could imagine this is what I would be doing, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much! I felt whimsical today and thought about snow. Here in Virginia they are predicting some snow, so perhaps I will reenact my verse. LOL. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a darn good job with this 15 syllable post Melissa, there's a lot of entries in this contest, this is as good as most, but a little more creative than most, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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I think you've done a darn good job with this 15 syllable post Melissa, there's a lot of entries in this contest, this is as good as most, but a little more creative than most, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Hi Roy. Thank you. I am glad you liked my twinkling snowflakes :)
Melissa
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A pleasure
Comment from Sally Law
This is magnificent! Oh, I need to learn how to do this type of form poetry. Beautifully penned and illustrated in fifteen syllables. If this doesn't win, I will eat my snow hat! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This is magnificent! Oh, I need to learn how to do this type of form poetry. Beautifully penned and illustrated in fifteen syllables. If this doesn't win, I will eat my snow hat! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Oh, you dear soul!!! Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review. I love the snow and thought I would wear my 'whimsy' cap today. Hugs, sweet Sal!!!
Melissa
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You certainly wore your whimsy cap and outfit! A delightful poem. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Water Sprinkles, has the proper formatting and brings us back to those days of joy and fascination of the frozen flakes dropping on a young face.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Water Sprinkles, has the proper formatting and brings us back to those days of joy and fascination of the frozen flakes dropping on a young face.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, Bill. :)
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
What a delightful moment you have penned for the child who is enjoying those frosted freckles of a new snowfall.
Your selected illustration and your snow-like stars make this post a super strong entry for this contest.
May the stars sprinkle other reviews too.
Mark
P.S. Best wishes for a happy, healthy New Year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Melissa,
What a delightful moment you have penned for the child who is enjoying those frosted freckles of a new snowfall.
Your selected illustration and your snow-like stars make this post a super strong entry for this contest.
May the stars sprinkle other reviews too.
Mark
P.S. Best wishes for a happy, healthy New Year!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Hello there, Mark. Thank you so very much for your lovely words on this short one... 15 syllables is hard for me. I'm delighted you like it and also send you warm New Year wishes!
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Comment from June Sargent
This is so cute! Frosted freckles - great imagery and beautiful presentation! Paints a lovely and fun scene of a winter wonderland seen through the eyes of a child..
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This is so cute! Frosted freckles - great imagery and beautiful presentation! Paints a lovely and fun scene of a winter wonderland seen through the eyes of a child..
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, June!
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Best one thus far in '23
Fabulous
Fun-filled
Loved the photo
and the added graphics * * *'s
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Best one thus far in '23
Fabulous
Fun-filled
Loved the photo
and the added graphics * * *'s
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, Tom! Holiday Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A magical write as you bring those twinkling snowflakes to life with a frosted sparkle, much enjoyed Melissa, you started off the New Year with a few white freckles here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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A magical write as you bring those twinkling snowflakes to life with a frosted sparkle, much enjoyed Melissa, you started off the New Year with a few white freckles here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, Dolly!
Melissa
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a sweet image you have created with this little poem. The child in each of us can feel the cold and the joy of that moment. Well done. Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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What a sweet image you have created with this little poem. The child in each of us can feel the cold and the joy of that moment. Well done. Happy New Year.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much Ginda. I love snowfall and wish we had some here in Virginia. At least I can imagine it. LOL
Melissa
