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President Chuck

Charlie

4 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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This was a great "last time I saw Charlie" story. I loved the ending with the security blanket and wondering why they lost touch. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

Comment from JT traveller
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Excellent prose. Invoking a real insight into your feelings for "Charlie". A pleasure to read. A good story. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts and feelings.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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The illustration and text complement each other. The story ends on an ironic note and draws a contrast between Charlie and the timid narrator. The characterisation could be further developed to make the theme resonate with the reader.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

Comment from Ricky1024
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This is an interesting history of Thomas Brown and creating the many characters such as Charlie Brown and Peanuts.
This also, was well written rich in Theme and y.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023