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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Triplets (Part Two)"An Encanto fan fic, cause why not.
2 total reviews
Comment from Gunner Lil
Good dialogue in this part. This reader would have liked to know what the room looked like that Pepa described.
After counting more than ten characters I gave up.
A not so easy read.
Good luck
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Good dialogue in this part. This reader would have liked to know what the room looked like that Pepa described.
After counting more than ten characters I gave up.
A not so easy read.
Good luck
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Yeah, lots of folks floating about.
Thanks! Your thoughts are appreciated.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very cool story I quite enjoyed it I was engaged from beginning to end. Bruno and julietta interesting characters. I find them to be vibrant and colorful as all your characters are. The concept from beginning to end and I was enjoying it very much. I see no issues with grammar and set punctuation subject matter. Gonna be a great submission here and I wish you best of luck!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Very cool story I quite enjoyed it I was engaged from beginning to end. Bruno and julietta interesting characters. I find them to be vibrant and colorful as all your characters are. The concept from beginning to end and I was enjoying it very much. I see no issues with grammar and set punctuation subject matter. Gonna be a great submission here and I wish you best of luck!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to review.
