Unconditional
My Dad.........16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This describes the kind of love our Heavenly Father gives us: "Unconditional
With a sweet, kind, caring love
Forgiving with gentleness"
But if you had an earthly dad who was like that, you are indeed blessed!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
  |
This describes the kind of love our Heavenly Father gives us: "Unconditional
With a sweet, kind, caring love
Forgiving with gentleness"
But if you had an earthly dad who was like that, you are indeed blessed!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
-
Hi Helen, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your
exceptional comments. My Dad was very special and died when I
was in my early 20's. Have a wonderful day!....Maria
Comment from Nottoway
I love this poem.
A clear and beautiful message of the love and guidance of a Dad.
I still recall so many easy going yet life long and life changing words from my Dad.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
|
I love this poem.
A clear and beautiful message of the love and guidance of a Dad.
I still recall so many easy going yet life long and life changing words from my Dad.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
-
Thank you so much for excellent review and you kind words.
Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Mia Twysted
The image leads the mind to think that it is the world that showers people with unconditional love. And the world that offers forgiveness. It is a shame we do not treat it better. I do not know if this is what you were trying to say but it is what I took away from it.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
|
The image leads the mind to think that it is the world that showers people with unconditional love. And the world that offers forgiveness. It is a shame we do not treat it better. I do not know if this is what you were trying to say but it is what I took away from it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
-
Hi Mia, thank you for the excellent review and your interesting
comments. In answer to your question, what I said was that my Dad gave me unconditional love which was a wonderful gift.
Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Janet Foor
Unconditional is a beautiful word for love. It's one of my very favorite words. If you've missed that kind of caring, forgiveness, gentle love, you've missed a lot.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
Unconditional is a beautiful word for love. It's one of my very favorite words. If you've missed that kind of caring, forgiveness, gentle love, you've missed a lot.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Janet, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
words. Happy New Year!.....Maria
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your words, so carefully chosen, invite us to feel the pureness of unconditional love. It is like a balm for bruised souls. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
Your words, so carefully chosen, invite us to feel the pureness of unconditional love. It is like a balm for bruised souls. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Ginda, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely
words. Happy New Year!....Maria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The love we have for our parents is very special and unique and I enjoyed your few words of love here Marie, special moments remembered here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
The love we have for our parents is very special and unique and I enjoyed your few words of love here Marie, special moments remembered here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Dolly, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
words. Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
Comment from Kaiku
Your words speak of a mother`s kindness and uncanny ability to provide the kind of forgiveness that is embraced. Certainly as a counselor for those with addiction issues, your words proved powerful but yet kind as well. Nice work.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
Your words speak of a mother`s kindness and uncanny ability to provide the kind of forgiveness that is embraced. Certainly as a counselor for those with addiction issues, your words proved powerful but yet kind as well. Nice work.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Kaiku, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your
exceptional comments. Happy New Year!...Maria
-
👍😎
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Maria.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like how you characterize your dad in line one,
and give examples in line two.
-A very good concluding line.
-It sounds like you have a wonderful dad,
and he would like your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
-Nice artwork and presentation, Maria.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like how you characterize your dad in line one,
and give examples in line two.
-A very good concluding line.
-It sounds like you have a wonderful dad,
and he would like your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Pam, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. Happy New Year!....Maria
-
You are very welcome, Maria.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
The few words ring true when one has faith in the one and only God, our Abba. Your adjectives are strong and characterise the true nature of God.
Very deep and spiritual poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
The few words ring true when one has faith in the one and only God, our Abba. Your adjectives are strong and characterise the true nature of God.
Very deep and spiritual poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Mario, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your
exceptional comments. Happy New Year!.....Maria
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your father' description sounds touching. The words you wrote are forgiving, gentleness, sweet, kind, caring, loving, and unconditional. These three-line poems are fun to write.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
|
Your father' description sounds touching. The words you wrote are forgiving, gentleness, sweet, kind, caring, loving, and unconditional. These three-line poems are fun to write.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
-
Hi Rosemary, Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words. Happy New Year!....Maria
