November Adventure
Three of us go to woods to get our Christmas tree.27 total reviews
Comment from Cherish Adams
What a fun memory shared with us in poetic fashion. Cute picture. I enjoyed your entry. This is such a good way to keepsake a memory. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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What a fun memory shared with us in poetic fashion. Cute picture. I enjoyed your entry. This is such a good way to keepsake a memory. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the nice review. It is an idea. Maybe I'll write poems for more of my old pictures.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a delightful adventure of picking a Christmas tree up in the woods. I enjoyed your descriptive imagery, visuals and a delightful presentation.
Liked your subtle humor too. A great offering for the Memories contest. I wish you luck with it.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This was a delightful adventure of picking a Christmas tree up in the woods. I enjoyed your descriptive imagery, visuals and a delightful presentation.
Liked your subtle humor too. A great offering for the Memories contest. I wish you luck with it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from JT traveller
Well done. I enjoyed the light hearted read. A well structured poem that is easy to read. A lovely memory it must be for you to keep forever. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Well done. I enjoyed the light hearted read. A well structured poem that is easy to read. A lovely memory it must be for you to keep forever. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you Jacqueline. I 'm so glad you liked my poem. It was fun to write and gave me a chance to share a photo.
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Happy days 😊
Comment from Bobby Jo
love this. As if you could go back into time, be there again, once more with your daddy. If only time was a traveling machine, that we could go back to. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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love this. As if you could go back into time, be there again, once more with your daddy. If only time was a traveling machine, that we could go back to. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you Bobby Jo. I keep hoping someone witll invent time travel. I'm glad you like my poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What an awesome picture, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest
entry. I liked the smooth flow of words and the great rhymes. The
words sounded just like a 3-year-old would speak. I liked the contrast
at the end--no more trekking in the woods, but a Christmas tree
lot.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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What an awesome picture, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest
entry. I liked the smooth flow of words and the great rhymes. The
words sounded just like a 3-year-old would speak. I liked the contrast
at the end--no more trekking in the woods, but a Christmas tree
lot.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for a great review and for sharing you thought with you comments. I'm pleased you liked it.
Comment from royowen
This is a great rhyming poem as an entry in this poetry contest in this poetry contest, recalling memories from one's youth where this child see and remembers those halcyon days of youth. Beautifully written poem, smooth. Well rhymed and great language, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This is a great rhyming poem as an entry in this poetry contest in this poetry contest, recalling memories from one's youth where this child see and remembers those halcyon days of youth. Beautifully written poem, smooth. Well rhymed and great language, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Where (to) briars were thick.the?
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you Roy. I'm so glad you like my little poem. It was fun to write. I'm glad you saw the error so I could correct it.
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Well done
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Cute story, showcasing the transition of Christmas traditions. Some great family time reviewing memories from the past. Thank you for sharing with the group.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Cute story, showcasing the transition of Christmas traditions. Some great family time reviewing memories from the past. Thank you for sharing with the group.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you Rachel. I appreciate you reviewing my little poem. It was fun back in the day when we cut down our own tree.
