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Anyone can snap, and we need to pay attention.4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
For being out of your comfort zone, you did an excellent job with this contest entry. I enjoyed reading. It would be wonderful if someone could recognize a person struggling. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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For being out of your comfort zone, you did an excellent job with this contest entry. I enjoyed reading. It would be wonderful if someone could recognize a person struggling. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and your feedback.
Comment from country ranch writer
It's strange that a dead writer is telling his own tale .maybe have a friend narrate it for you about snapping from all the stress that it caused you to let lose.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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It's strange that a dead writer is telling his own tale .maybe have a friend narrate it for you about snapping from all the stress that it caused you to let lose.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
Comment from lancellot
Making a complete tale with a one hundred words is not easy. The impulse to 'tell' is very strong because of the lack of space. The narration here has a solid moral and a good message. But, it just that. A person telling us, not showing. We don't see these things happen. We are told what happened.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Making a complete tale with a one hundred words is not easy. The impulse to 'tell' is very strong because of the lack of space. The narration here has a solid moral and a good message. But, it just that. A person telling us, not showing. We don't see these things happen. We are told what happened.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
Comment from prettybluebirds
These short stories are a challenge to write, but I enjoy them. Your story is interesting and covers a touchy subject. The message you send in the story is one we need to heed. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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These short stories are a challenge to write, but I enjoy them. Your story is interesting and covers a touchy subject. The message you send in the story is one we need to heed. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
