Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Good

This is a good entry to the Start and Ends the Same contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated. However, it is just matter of fact stated ideas. It has no poetic language or flair. The poem would be enhanced with some poetic language, metaphors......etc. A visual would also help this piece. Do you mean journal or journey in your description? Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

thanks as usual

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 09-Jan-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Very nicely constructed poem. It tells a beautiful story in few words, but the words are meaningful and appropriate. I liked: found myself, found my soulmate...
Very well done!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

thanks a lot I have been truly blessed

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Korea is many miles from the United States; it brings us a lot of cultures that we are not used to. I'm sure your journey there started when you were in the service. Many do go there as a soldier.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

i served in the Peace Corps but my Korean born wife became a US officer and served twice in Korea ! first Korean born female US officer to serve in Korea