A World Changed
Englyn Penfyr3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I could study this form longer to be able to comment on it, but I won't, I will just comment on the words and messages in your work, I found it amazing that in some of these short stanzas, you have questions along with the answer, the form flows wonderfully, the stanzas could stand alone yet meld together very well, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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I could study this form longer to be able to comment on it, but I won't, I will just comment on the words and messages in your work, I found it amazing that in some of these short stanzas, you have questions along with the answer, the form flows wonderfully, the stanzas could stand alone yet meld together very well, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you for such this lovely review! Very much appreciated and the 6 shiny stars! :-) Thank you again, have a wonderful day.
Comment from Bill Schott
This englyn penfyr, A World Changed, has the proper formatting and brings our minds to a pure state, where all of what mankind has been lowered to can be forgotten and life seen as a shining plane of perfection.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This englyn penfyr, A World Changed, has the proper formatting and brings our minds to a pure state, where all of what mankind has been lowered to can be forgotten and life seen as a shining plane of perfection.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Hi Bill! Thank you for stopping by and leaving me this sweet review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not familiar with this form Susan, and the only problem with it is the metre which is uneven and it interrupts the flow. This is just my opinion and I know you are a master of metre in other poems. Having said all that, I adore the sentiments here, a touching poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I'm not familiar with this form Susan, and the only problem with it is the metre which is uneven and it interrupts the flow. This is just my opinion and I know you are a master of metre in other poems. Having said all that, I adore the sentiments here, a touching poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Hi Dolly! Thank you for reading and for the review! The uneven Metre is bounded by the form's rules. Tricky little form at that. I'm just trying to tackle some of these Welsh syllabic forms. New Year, new forms! :-) Thanks again. Wishing you all the best in the New Year!
