Comment from nomi338

Excellent

And so will go another year, down the drain , I will retain, my hope for the future. My ruptured dreams the Doc will suture with a health dose of reality. With a healthy slap, the command to snap out of my dreams, enjoy Summer's frozen creams, Strap up for the approaching cold, as the leaves begin to turn to gold. Winter will not be too far behind, Guaranteed to be unkind as ever I wait for it to come.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023

Your review is in good form, nomi. Thanks.

reply by nomi338 on 10-Jan-2023

Thanks Bill. Here of late I have been getting inspiration from the work of other writers. There will soon be a poem from this review that was inspired by your post. So thank you.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

And on and on and on. Something every month except August. My youngest granddaughter's birthday is in August, so we have something every month. I liked reading this very much.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

Thanks, Yvonne

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This poem is a fun and lighthearted reflection on the passing of the months and the various holidays and events that they bring. The rhyme scheme is consistent and the language is simple and easy to follow. The poem has a joyful and upbeat tone, and the reference to running for a Valentine adds a touch of whimsy. Overall, it is a charming and enjoyable piece of writing.

Well done

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

Thank you, Lisa

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are descriptive, creative and made me smile a lot! I
enjoyed reading the agenda this author has for the entire year! The
poem flows and connects well. Hi Bill, Happy New Year!...Maria

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

Thanks, Maria

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there Bill. What a lovely little poem on the new coming year. I thought it to be adorable with a catchy meter. Nicely done my friend and happy new year!

-Kerry

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

Thanks, Kerry

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 10-Jan-2023

Welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great overview of the calendar and what we can look forward to - not just the different types of candies at the store! I wonder if you really meant "free verse" as this one rhymes very nicely!

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

It was going be, but I wasn?t feeling any great phrasing coming up.

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Bill, This is a very nice and very well written free verse with very good rhyming. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. You had all the holidays coming up listed on here! Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023

Thank you, Teri