She is complete
This woman is tirelss11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this unique write about a woman for all seasons here and your poem is clever and inventive and I enjoyed every season appreciating women, a fine poem, I was entertained and soothed by this write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed this unique write about a woman for all seasons here and your poem is clever and inventive and I enjoyed every season appreciating women, a fine poem, I was entertained and soothed by this write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I really like what you've done here - referencing a woman of all seasons, and then breaking her gifts down into the separate seasons. I like winter - romantic and playful with reddened cheeks:-)
Very nice twist for this contest. Good luck.
Pam
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I really like what you've done here - referencing a woman of all seasons, and then breaking her gifts down into the separate seasons. I like winter - romantic and playful with reddened cheeks:-)
Very nice twist for this contest. Good luck.
Pam
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I appreciate your review and picking out a favorite part. Thanks.
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely portrait of a "woman of all seasons." I like how you covered this woman's beauty in every season and that what makes her beauty lasting is that she is "A child of God whose prayer is life."
Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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What a lovely portrait of a "woman of all seasons." I like how you covered this woman's beauty in every season and that what makes her beauty lasting is that she is "A child of God whose prayer is life."
Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much.
Comment from LJbutterfly
As Michaelangelo sculpted and painted portraits, so have you used words to paint in creative poetry, a beautiful woman for every season, using the colorful references for that season. For all of the phenomenal attributes of this woman, you end with, she is "A child of God whose prayer is life." Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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As Michaelangelo sculpted and painted portraits, so have you used words to paint in creative poetry, a beautiful woman for every season, using the colorful references for that season. For all of the phenomenal attributes of this woman, you end with, she is "A child of God whose prayer is life." Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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I appreciate your very nice review. Thank you.
Comment from PENofFIRE
You deserve many, many six stars for this beautiful poem. You have an awesome love for life and people. Your work blesses me to the core of being. I thank God for giving you this gift of writing that blesses me so much.
Your friend,
Pen
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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You deserve many, many six stars for this beautiful poem. You have an awesome love for life and people. Your work blesses me to the core of being. I thank God for giving you this gift of writing that blesses me so much.
Your friend,
Pen
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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You are awesome my friend.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a delightful way you have chosen to describe a woman's positive attributes by comparing her to what is best about each season. A very unique approach. In your last stanza, I believe it should read "whose prayer". Check on that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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What a delightful way you have chosen to describe a woman's positive attributes by comparing her to what is best about each season. A very unique approach. In your last stanza, I believe it should read "whose prayer". Check on that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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I will check that line. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
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You were correct. Thank you again.
Comment from JLR
Quite complete, well written, and I am certain you know that you are truly blessed to have this mate. Good success, you certainly are already a winner.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Quite complete, well written, and I am certain you know that you are truly blessed to have this mate. Good success, you certainly are already a winner.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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That is an awesome review. Thank you.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
I absolutely love this contest entry, it was brilliant, adding in each season. Very beautiful really well done! I just gave you my vote. Good luck!
-Kerry
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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I absolutely love this contest entry, it was brilliant, adding in each season. Very beautiful really well done! I just gave you my vote. Good luck!
-Kerry
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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That is awesome. Thank you
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You're very welcome. It was an awesome poem.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a wonderful tribute to the woman in your life and an excellent entry for this contest, good luck. Thank you for entering the contest. Your all seasons poem is well-written and clever. Very Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This is a wonderful tribute to the woman in your life and an excellent entry for this contest, good luck. Thank you for entering the contest. Your all seasons poem is well-written and clever. Very Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much Quite the compliment coming from you.
Comment from royowen
Just love the theme of this fine work, and particularly the person who's being honoured in it. Whether fiction or not, I know quite a few woman who fit this eloquent description. Beautifully written and a worthy entry in this contest, well done, a great narrative, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Just love the theme of this fine work, and particularly the person who's being honoured in it. Whether fiction or not, I know quite a few woman who fit this eloquent description. Beautifully written and a worthy entry in this contest, well done, a great narrative, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Roy. Your words are very much appreciated.
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Most welcome
