Under the Sea
3rd Place Finish7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
LOL. "Who lives in a pineapple under the seas?"
My grandkids love Spongebob and I heard that song so many times it's embedded in my brain!
This is adorable and I'm thrilled you stepped into the winner's circle with it!
(I was attempting to PM you (and all who reviewed Debi's poem) regarding thanking you for your comments re" my fall and guess what? After 25 PMs the site cuts you off! To reduce the chance of SPAM)
Hah!
More than one way to skin a cat.
(What a horrible phrase.)
I came to read, review and thank you!
"Absorbant and yellow and porous is he
(SpongeBob SquarePants!)
If nautical nonsense be something you wish
(SpongeBob SquarePants!)
Then drop on the deck and flop like a fish"
Good gravy Marie! I'll be singing that all day!
:)
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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LOL. "Who lives in a pineapple under the seas?"
My grandkids love Spongebob and I heard that song so many times it's embedded in my brain!
This is adorable and I'm thrilled you stepped into the winner's circle with it!
(I was attempting to PM you (and all who reviewed Debi's poem) regarding thanking you for your comments re" my fall and guess what? After 25 PMs the site cuts you off! To reduce the chance of SPAM)
Hah!
More than one way to skin a cat.
(What a horrible phrase.)
I came to read, review and thank you!
"Absorbant and yellow and porous is he
(SpongeBob SquarePants!)
If nautical nonsense be something you wish
(SpongeBob SquarePants!)
Then drop on the deck and flop like a fish"
Good gravy Marie! I'll be singing that all day!
:)
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Ha! Yes, that sow?s tune was catchy. Glad you are better. Thanks for the review. I was darn lucky to have placed 3rd with all the great ones in that competition. Blessings!
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Blessings back!
(My oldest granddaughter, now 18, used to have me do that little ditty at the end of the theme song with her!
do do do do, do DOO!
:)
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Cool and brilliant. Brilliant minds are nurtured with brilliant humor.
Bring on the crabby patties!!!!!! Thank you for sharing.
Good Luck in the contest
Write on
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Cool and brilliant. Brilliant minds are nurtured with brilliant humor.
Bring on the crabby patties!!!!!! Thank you for sharing.
Good Luck in the contest
Write on
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Barbara. You are such a wonderful blessing! This was so nice to see after being away all day. Goodnight!
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YW. Blessings
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Is the pineapple named Patrick or is it Bob being the sunglasses are displayed on the pineapple. I'm not sure what the sponge is doing but possibly it will soak up the juice.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Is the pineapple named Patrick or is it Bob being the sunglasses are displayed on the pineapple. I'm not sure what the sponge is doing but possibly it will soak up the juice.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Sponge Bob Square Pants.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Under the Sea, has the proper formatting but needs some punctuation to make it better:...............................................
Bob asked,
"Hand me a sponge,
Patrick."
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This 2-4-2, Under the Sea, has the proper formatting but needs some punctuation to make it better:...............................................
Bob asked,
"Hand me a sponge,
Patrick."
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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I rarely put punctuation into my poems and almost always drop the caps. Now, I?m no poet by any stretch of the imagination, so this may be why I?m getting my butt kicked in the competition. Or it could just be because many are better. Ha! Good thing is, I write for sanity and compete for fun! God bless, Bill!
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This may not be a winner, but the punctuation will give it a better shot, really.
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Thank you my friend!
Comment from JT traveller
Cleverly selected wording and fits the criteria. The larger font and background colour make it clearer to read. A nicely written piece. Well done. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Cleverly selected wording and fits the criteria. The larger font and background colour make it clearer to read. A nicely written piece. Well done. Congratulations.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you. It is going down in flames, but there are several good ones. No biggie since I write for sanity and compete for fun. God bless.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 poem contest.
I like that is lighthearted and colourful.
A fun write - I like Spongebob Squarepants :-)
Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 poem contest.
I like that is lighthearted and colourful.
A fun write - I like Spongebob Squarepants :-)
Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you! We shall see how it goes!
Comment from Kaiku
Clever. Very good. I had roasted pineapple with cinnamon not long ago. Try to eat pineapple every day so your 2-4-2 is close to the heart. Sponge Bob, an great cartoon even for us adults. Good luck in the contest. You might be hard to beat.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Clever. Very good. I had roasted pineapple with cinnamon not long ago. Try to eat pineapple every day so your 2-4-2 is close to the heart. Sponge Bob, an great cartoon even for us adults. Good luck in the contest. You might be hard to beat.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Competition is always stiff on FS. That is why I like it so. Bring on the Poet Masters so that I may do battle!
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As Macbeth once said, `Lay on Macduff from who`s mother was untimely ripped` or something like that!
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Ha! Makes me want a Hamlet and cheese!
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HA
