The Humble Donkey
The Donkey shares the journey to Bethlehem.2 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is very well-written. An interesting take on the Christmas story from the viewpoint of the donkey. Great closing lines: "I this humble stable surrounded by animals and multitude of stars in the sky, the hope of the world is born, Jesus Christ. His earthly journey is just beginning."
I believe you meant the first word to be "In" rather than "I'
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This is very well-written. An interesting take on the Christmas story from the viewpoint of the donkey. Great closing lines: "I this humble stable surrounded by animals and multitude of stars in the sky, the hope of the world is born, Jesus Christ. His earthly journey is just beginning."
I believe you meant the first word to be "In" rather than "I'
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind comments and rating. I wish I had caught that error! I appreciate your pointing it out. I read and re-read and still missed it!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Oh, how beautiful and original to tell the nativity story from the donkey's point of view. It reinforces the reality of Jesus' humble birth. Very well written. There is a small typo in last paragraph.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Oh, how beautiful and original to tell the nativity story from the donkey's point of view. It reinforces the reality of Jesus' humble birth. Very well written. There is a small typo in last paragraph.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your kind comments and rating. I missed it even after reading and re-reading! Thanks for catching that!
